This is a good story for your first M-Rated story personally I think this might be better than the shameless smut ones but maybe not either way love the story love you keep it up!

"NOSEBLEED!" TT don't worry about it I'll be fine...

Lime? Full on lemon.
Pretty hot action.
This is something you wrote longer ago, and the sentence structure needs a bit of tightening. I hope I don't sound mean. I enjoyed it, but a few grammar corrections would fine-tune your story.
1)your second sentence is very long. 2)...night, I said 'Screw the consequences!'. And ... the punctuation there would look better as: ...night, I said 'screw the consequences!' And ... (not gonna type everything out) 3) I wonder how our babies will look like. - what our babies will look like.

Hey Lex! I got a review from you, so the best way I could repay is a review for you!

So I do not read Fairy Tail, but I know a little bit about cause my friend constantly blabbers about it whenever she meets me!

Oooh an intense passionate piece is it? I'll be honest, It will be a first for me! "A shiver went down my spine when his fingers lightly hovered over my rib." ; "his mouth soon found mine in a desperate game of domination." Man! that was great! In terms of writing you manage to showcase your first-person writing skills very well too!

The rush of feelings, emotions and thoughts that rush through one's mind when experiencing sexual pleasure is done quite well! "V-card before marriage" ; "How our babies will look like." Hehehehe so random, but so realistic!

I can't comment much on characterization, simply because this is such a small little piece. But I could get a feel of her as a shy, introvert and somewhat clumsy and kiddish girl? Don't know how close I am, but let me know if I hit the spot. (oh!)

Honestly, when reading about love making I don't like a blow-by-blow (pun not intended) description of the same. I feel the less said, the better. But hey! Power to you! :)

Overall I enjoyed the piece, it was packed with a lot of intensity despite being only 472 words! Great job!

-HFER

Nice and your name is lexie to and we spell it the same