This is well-written and entertaining. I don't mind the occasional Albus
and Weasley-bashing. Makes for a nice change. Keep it up.

I have a number of various opinions about the course of the story, however I feel I must say that Hermione didn't have to change her last name just because her mother remarried. Older children rarely do when in that situation. That and she'd likely be marrying Harry in the future so it's kinda pointless.

Beyond that, I feel Harry's magic is a little underwhelming. If you want a truly deadly use of his magic then you should have him use it like Maya Yostuba does her Night magic.

Please update

This story is really good

in the books, Ron wasn't torqued over Harry being "an attention seeking prat". He was mad because he thought Harry had gone off and broken the rules (yet AGAIN), entered his name into the Goblet... and not told Ron. And this, after they'd made promises to the effect that if either of them DID, they'd tell the other how...

Why is it that everyone who BASHES Ron- Harry's oldest and best friend- bends over backwards to kiss the arse of a cowardly, bullying, child-abusing, murdering unrepentant Death Eater like Snape? (and yes, he WAS unrepentant. He was just FINE with the bigotry, racism, violence, rape and murder the death eaters committed; he had no problem with their dark and evil magic. he didn't even care they were going to murder an infant. The only reason he balked was because Voldemort was threatening the life of another man's wife Snape coveted. **if it had been Neville Voldemort came for, Snape would still be a loyal death eater.** The only reason he even lifted a finger in any half-arsed attempt to 'help' harry was because Magic COMPELLED him. Meanwhile he spent the rest of his life bullying little children and conveniently vanishing when he was desperately needed by the 'Light.' He was a bigot and sadist and death eater bully LONG before Lily cut off her friendship; and he was a rotten human being- worse than any portrayal of Ron- till the day he died.)
-200 points for Snape buttkissing.

-100 points for Ron bashing. Ron Bashing should be left to the simpleminded, idiotic, hormonal teen shipping moron crowd who are pissed off that Rupert Grint kissed Emma Watson and they didn't, and the wilfully illiterate who ignore the brave, honorable, generous and self-sacrificing Ron who was actually in the books. It's shit-tier writing.

It comes when the sequel ?

Hermione's dad is a BEAST

Welp, I hope you pick this up again, I was enjoying it. Bit confused about the rescue party and the time differential. Harry was in Fiore for 6 Years, but only gone from Hogwarts for 3. But when the rescue party followed after him reversed that and changed the ratio entirely with the Fiore crowd following Harry 4 days later, and arriving a month after Harry did. Basically the ratio went from(Earth:Fiore) 1:2 to 15:2. On an unrelated note, one instance of "conceited" I saw should be "conceded" and you got Beauxbatons wrong every time it appeared in text.

so good.
love it.
please write more soon.
wow.

Natsu and Susan, Gray and Daphne

love the story please continue it.

You gave Harry the Equivalent of Axel's Keyblade, Bond of Flames, which is what his Chakrams turned into in Dream Drop Distance. (Kingdom Hearts 3D)

is there NaLu in the story?