Reviews for Deception
Kanashimi77 chapter 34 . 8/19
OH. MY. GOD!

This fix was absolute gold! I can't believe it's OVER! I binged this book in two days straight. I absolutely loved it. I really like the relationship between saunaru, and Itachi was so bombbbb! You totally nailed his attitude! I laughed so much throughout the story, thank you soon much. You're a absolute GENIUS! Word cannot describe how much I loves this. MUAH! j
Msscleverfox chapter 6 . 6/11
Ok what is going on in this chapter. Incomplete sentences and I can’t follow what is happening. Good story though but this chapter need a re-edit to it. It’s broken up half way down.
Ryan Mashall chapter 34 . 5/25
Nooooo it’s over already? I loved this sm. If you do write a sequel can u plz plz get naruto drunk? Or sasuke’s reaction to someone accidentally givn naruto anesthetic
Ryan Mashall chapter 29 . 5/24
I just realized tht this really reminds me of batman
Ryan Mashall chapter 13 . 5/22
Wait dafq, this is th first time i’ve ever heard of a story getting reported, bt also y?
Ryan Mashall chapter 10 . 5/22
If he knows even the mayor closely, maybe naruto isnt the ‘peasant’ orochimaru seems to think he is
Ryan Mashall chapter 9 . 5/22
Gah i love this sm
Ryan Mashall chapter 8 . 5/22
Hehehe sasuke’s too far gone, there’s no way he’ll b satisfied just after sex
Ryan Mashall chapter 7 . 5/22
Pls dnt lets sakura fangirl too hard
Ryan Mashall chapter 5 . 5/22
Pain still hasn’t been mentioned, so i feel like he’s important
Ryan Mashall chapter 4 . 5/22
Sasuke is hooked and naruto’s a bamf
Ryan Mashall chapter 1 . 5/20
Im intrigued! Also whoo the steam in here!
Marvolo.R chapter 10 . 4/26
I was wondering.. Did you deliberately change Kakuzu's name? Or was it a mistake? I noticed in the previous chapter that you wrote Kakuzo and here it is again.
Marvolo.R chapter 9 . 4/26
I'd say it's a good thing it took you so many words to write it. Instead of 5 chapters I have almost twice as much to read so it's win-win for me otherwise what else would I be reading in these boring pandemic times? Another fine chapter, thanks. I hope they somehow break Orochimaru's hold on Naruto
Marvolo.R chapter 5 . 4/25
Wow the phone sex was such a brilliant idea I laughed out loud great chapter
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