| Reviews for Deception |
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Kanashimi77 chapter 34 . 8/19 OH. MY. GOD! This fix was absolute gold! I can't believe it's OVER! I binged this book in two days straight. I absolutely loved it. I really like the relationship between saunaru, and Itachi was so bombbbb! You totally nailed his attitude! I laughed so much throughout the story, thank you soon much. You're a absolute GENIUS! Word cannot describe how much I loves this. MUAH! j |
Msscleverfox chapter 6 . 6/11 Ok what is going on in this chapter. Incomplete sentences and I can’t follow what is happening. Good story though but this chapter need a re-edit to it. It’s broken up half way down. |
Ryan Mashall chapter 34 . 5/25 Nooooo it’s over already? I loved this sm. If you do write a sequel can u plz plz get naruto drunk? Or sasuke’s reaction to someone accidentally givn naruto anesthetic |
Ryan Mashall chapter 29 . 5/24 I just realized tht this really reminds me of batman |
Ryan Mashall chapter 13 . 5/22 Wait dafq, this is th first time i’ve ever heard of a story getting reported, bt also y? |
Ryan Mashall chapter 10 . 5/22 If he knows even the mayor closely, maybe naruto isnt the ‘peasant’ orochimaru seems to think he is |
Ryan Mashall chapter 9 . 5/22 Gah i love this sm |
Ryan Mashall chapter 8 . 5/22 Hehehe sasuke’s too far gone, there’s no way he’ll b satisfied just after sex |
Ryan Mashall chapter 7 . 5/22 Pls dnt lets sakura fangirl too hard |
Ryan Mashall chapter 5 . 5/22 Pain still hasn’t been mentioned, so i feel like he’s important |
Ryan Mashall chapter 4 . 5/22 Sasuke is hooked and naruto’s a bamf |
Ryan Mashall chapter 1 . 5/20 Im intrigued! Also whoo the steam in here! |
Marvolo.R chapter 10 . 4/26 I was wondering.. Did you deliberately change Kakuzu's name? Or was it a mistake? I noticed in the previous chapter that you wrote Kakuzo and here it is again. |
Marvolo.R chapter 9 . 4/26 I'd say it's a good thing it took you so many words to write it. Instead of 5 chapters I have almost twice as much to read so it's win-win for me otherwise what else would I be reading in these boring pandemic times? Another fine chapter, thanks. I hope they somehow break Orochimaru's hold on Naruto |
Marvolo.R chapter 5 . 4/25 Wow the phone sex was such a brilliant idea I laughed out loud great chapter |