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Sapphirepelt3 chapter 13 . 8/10/2017 I really like your character, Hisoka :) and I've never read a OHSHC fanfic where the OC has haphephobia. It's made it really interesting to read about her interactions with the hosts. I hope you continue writing whether it's this fanfiction or other works! :) |
fishy7073 chapter 13 . 7/17/2017 Noooooo. Why am I left with such a great cliffhanger? (pun slightly intended) |
Jenny chapter 3 . 9/2/2016 Great writing! Enjoyed it a lot. |
Senpai.Kush chapter 1 . 8/3/2016 This was a really good nice story! Hey, I have an Idea! why don't you come to my profile and give me some feedback on my stories? Gracias! |
Guest chapter 8 . 4/16/2016 Noooooo! Not the end of June! Please update again sooner then that! The story is too amazing! |
Guest chapter 5 . 4/16/2016 I love this story and I hope you update soon but... Is there even a pitcher in basketball? I don't think so. I love your writing though. |
MeganeAlpaca chapter 7 . 3/22/2016 When are you gonna update? I live your story! Please update more |
Momochan77 chapter 7 . 2/3/2016 I have to say I really like this story so far. Hisoka is a great character, she's very spunky and it's great how she's helping Haruhi get into Ouran! Please update again soon :) because I really want to know what happens next! Especially between he and Kyoya! |
BizzyLizy chapter 7 . 1/17/2016 Just a reminder that you don't have to have a new paragraph every two lines, and remember to use your commas :) Also, what does "Just isn't it" mean? Thanks for updating! |
just a fan chapter 6 . 10/8/2015 I loved to see Haruhi in this chapter! It'll be interesting to see your take on her as a side character in the future - though I love hisoka I'd love to see more of her x |
ChordOverstreetFan chapter 6 . 9/11/2015 Not enough Haruhi for my taste. I don't mind her not being the MC but I still don't like that she's basically been demoted to an extra. |
gothicpoet0615 chapter 6 . 7/3/2015 please write more chapters for this story! i love it so far and want to see what happens next! |
Cali Michaelis chapter 5 . 4/22/2015 This is ADORABLE! I love it! |
TheLittleBookThief chapter 5 . 2/2/2015 Ooooo things are starting to happen :D I will be anxiously awaiting the next chapter. I'm having a lot of fun reading this and I love Hisoka's personality. Well,good luck with your writing! |
seeds123 chapter 5 . 1/29/2015 please update soon :) |