Reviews for What If?
Sapphirepelt3 chapter 13 . 8/10/2017
I really like your character, Hisoka :) and I've never read a OHSHC fanfic where the OC has haphephobia. It's made it really interesting to read about her interactions with the hosts. I hope you continue writing whether it's this fanfiction or other works! :)
fishy7073 chapter 13 . 7/17/2017
Noooooo. Why am I left with such a great cliffhanger? (pun slightly intended)
Jenny chapter 3 . 9/2/2016
Great writing! Enjoyed it a lot.
Senpai.Kush chapter 1 . 8/3/2016
This was a really good nice story!

Hey, I have an Idea! why don't you come to my profile and give me some feedback on my stories? Gracias!
Guest chapter 8 . 4/16/2016
Noooooo! Not the end of June! Please update again sooner then that! The story is too amazing!
Guest chapter 5 . 4/16/2016
I love this story and I hope you update soon but... Is there even a pitcher in basketball? I don't think so. I love your writing though.
MeganeAlpaca chapter 7 . 3/22/2016
When are you gonna update? I live your story! Please update more
Momochan77 chapter 7 . 2/3/2016
I have to say I really like this story so far. Hisoka is a great character, she's very spunky and it's great how she's helping Haruhi get into Ouran! Please update again soon :) because I really want to know what happens next! Especially between he and Kyoya!
BizzyLizy chapter 7 . 1/17/2016
Just a reminder that you don't have to have a new paragraph every two lines, and remember to use your commas :) Also, what does "Just isn't it" mean? Thanks for updating!
just a fan chapter 6 . 10/8/2015
I loved to see Haruhi in this chapter! It'll be interesting to see your take on her as a side character in the future - though I love hisoka I'd love to see more of her x
ChordOverstreetFan chapter 6 . 9/11/2015
Not enough Haruhi for my taste.
I don't mind her not being the MC but I still don't like that she's basically been demoted to an extra.
gothicpoet0615 chapter 6 . 7/3/2015
please write more chapters for this story! i love it so far and want to see what happens next!
Cali Michaelis chapter 5 . 4/22/2015
This is ADORABLE! I love it!
TheLittleBookThief chapter 5 . 2/2/2015
Ooooo things are starting to happen :D I will be anxiously awaiting the next chapter. I'm having a lot of fun reading this and I love Hisoka's personality. Well,good luck with your writing!
seeds123 chapter 5 . 1/29/2015
please update soon :)
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