Again, wow. It's not that often I find stories that leave me so...conflicted? I mean, I did enjoy it, but I also get the feeling that I should probably be way more disturbed than I am. Probably has to do with the fact that it's all fiction, but...meh. I'm really curious where this was going to go, though. Either way, thanks for the read.

Wow. Just...wow. You know, if this WASN'T Sophia, it would probably be downright horrifying. As things stand, it's still kinda disturbing, but Sophia really is just that unlikable, like, 90% of the time, so it's almost funny. That, or I'm tired/been up too long. Either-or.

Lol, have you even entertained the thought that if Masters were easily countered, then they wouldn't be considered so dangerous? Hearbreaker would be stopped long ago.

I mean, that's really far from the first time in this fic, whey you let obvious mistakes show, but this is bold even among them.

Seems like this is time to part ways with this story. All in all, the idea is hilariously underdeveloped. You could have so much fun with power such as this, do so many FUNY things (if you are not into 'improving the world'). But instead you kept to primitive bashing and clumsy plot.

This is fucked up on all the levels

I liked the bit about raping his sister

Colin comes off a little informal here, but the confrontation felt correct, that ring of verisimilitude. Ultimately Armsmaster is something of a blunt instrument — he engineers for efficiency not socials. Coming to the end here, but very much enjoying the story.

Thanks for sharing!

Nice story - OP Taylor, no angsting, revenge, almost bdsm like mind games. It's nice to read one story where Taylor isn't a hero and I mean, really not a hero. Many villain Taylors are in reality edgy, dark heroes saving everyone. Here, she doesn't care.

Missy was a masterliece - it's first story, where author doesn't try to show how much more mature she is than others, first story where she behaves like someone her age. It was interesting to see her do everything without mind control, on her own.

I love Aisha.

I'd be surprised if someone could take the beginning of the fic, but not this. The first part's way, way worse than what happened here. S.S. torture was spread out over months, drowning her in despair dozens and dozens of times resetting her back to factory setting, then repeating the process again and again.

This cruelty only lasted a couple hours. Horrible as it may have been, its way less intense.

a twisted Taylor, interesting story, hope you continue it

I thought powers upgraded when you break the second time?

Reading this with Skillets Circus for a Psycho is surprisingly fitting.

huh... that makes a disturbing amount of sense.

What you did with Pet and Grue was evil and it is hilarious while also disturbing

now i feel even sadder about Amy ;.;

she's one of my favorite characters... on the other hand, congrats you managed to easily surpass canon in f*cked up ness (still gonna keep reading though

now i am really curious of how Queen got Vista, wasn't she wearing the anti-mind control helmet still?