Hey Brightcloud! Great chapter!
GO FEATHERPELT! FIGHT THEM ALL! Now, do you still need OCs?

Name: Duskcloud Name: Swiftpaw
Clan: Lifeclan Clan: Lifeclan
Occupation: Warrior Occupation: Apprentice
Gender: Female Gender: Tom
Appearance: Lean tortoiseshell with amber eyes. Appearance: Has a spiky grey pelt and golden
eyes
Update soon!

Lightningstrike : gray tom with black paws and tail tip. :warrior of dawnclan

Shadowcreek
TwilightClan
Warrior
Black she-cat with silver markings like a creek and dark amber eyes. Very strict but soft with kits.

By the way, I love your story! I love your made up Clans! And your characters. Please update soon. ;)

UPDATE!

K, I'm favoriting...

This is really well done!

Linghtningblaze
Twilight clan
Female
Brilliant fighter poor hunter

This is amazing good job. I have two oc's rave blaze and moonstar

Name: Flowerpaw/Flowerpetal
Appearance: ginger tabby she-cat with amber eyes
Clan: whichever clan needs more cats

thx for putting my OCs in!

I like Snakekit the best right now, then Ratkit, Glimmerkit and then Hisskit. Bloodmoon is okay, same as Flintclaw. and just to ask, but who's their father(the kits)?

This is really good! Love it! Can't wait for more!

Lovely chapter! At first I wasn't too interested in this story, but now I'm looking forward to more updates!

Thx for putting them in:3
The thing is I put it that I wanted them in Deathclan... but dats alright I guess :)
Can't have everything u want.. oh well..
Thx anywayX3
*snuggles*

So far this seems like it could be interesting. DeathClan seems very... negative. Also, I thought I should let you know that it is against the rules to post a chapter with only the allegiances, so you should maybe add a prologue or something to it. Can't wait to read it c: