| Reviews for A Fine Line |
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Lilly96 chapter 39 . 8/3 Couldn't stop reading thank you! |
zemblenity chapter 39 . 6/8 Freaking beautiful! |
Couggg chapter 3 . 5/3 It's so weird to read about Leah attending WSU because I go there and now stay in Pullman! Very weird but love this fanfic so far |
dramaqueen452 chapter 39 . 4/21 How have I never read this story?! From the very first page, it was absolutely brilliant. I was so engrossed with Leah from start to finish. I normally don't like anything with Leah tht isn't Blackwater, but this was so cleverly and creatively done, that I might be a convert. And the work you did with Emily? Brilliant. I'm off to stalk your profile now, to see what other gems u have |
Sarahn1991 chapter 39 . 2/14 The emotional roller coaster of this story was astonishing. 11/10 |
Sarahn1991 chapter 31 . 2/14 I almost don’t even want to read the rest because I know shits going to hit the fan again somehow haha. Paul’s going to imprint and I’m going to cry! |
Sarahn1991 chapter 16 . 2/12 If Paul imprints on Rachel I’m going to throw my phone. I’m so emotionally invested in your characters, you’re amazing. |
LadyGoogle chapter 39 . 1/22 I dont often review but with your story I had to. Its the first I've ever read that gets into Leah's mind and really showcased the trauma she suffered prior and once phased. It was nice to change the Cullen dynamics and also put Rose to the forefront. Too many stories before rose tinted the whole thing, making Leah the bad guy but I never felt she was and you gave her a voice perfectly. I like how you made Emily as she was, and that the imprint wasnt all sunshine and roses and of course I panicked when I realised Rachel was coming back. I'm so glad you gave Leah her happy ending and I commend you on a well thought out story. |
Rgreen chapter 39 . 9/18/2019 Truly amazing writing...great story |
TastefullyRetarded chapter 18 . 5/13/2019 HOLY SHIT! I JUST REALIZED.. WHAT IF PAUL IMPRINTS ON RACHEL ... now I'm scared to read XC |
Daniqueenb chapter 39 . 3/20/2018 I love this! I've never thought about Leah and Paul. What's crazy is how everyone just accepts the imprint, even in the movie! You can't just fall out of love with someone! Love at first sight isin't a thing. Even if it was, what was Sam and Emily's relationship really built on? Fantasy? Everyone just went along with it, and that never sat right with me. Thank you again for this story. I watched the twilight movies, but Bella is boring with no sense of self perservation. New Moon is the only one I liked. Jacob is so much more and so is Leah. I'm glad someone else could see it. |
Jane chapter 5 . 12/5/2017 Oh poor Leah. How appalling. And poor Sam, once he realises what he's done, and what he has forgotten! He's never going to get a truly HEA. |
Jane chapter 4 . 12/5/2017 Oops, I should have reviewed before this but I couldn't stop reading long enough. I LOVE this story. I love how you've got right inside the heads of your characters. I love this Leah, I've always thought she was very badly done by in the S.M. books. I could just ray for her anguish. Can't wait to read on and see what happens. I love your writing too, sorry, no time to be more specific. |
Guest chapter 25 . 8/17/2017 I love Rose so much! She always was my favourite Cullen but this Rose is just Perfection Incarnated |
SayraTasnim chapter 18 . 8/16/2017 He's a dick. |