I love this story. The emotion is just amazing. One comment though that I noticed is that in the first chapter you talk of a sister through the illness of Fitz's mum's illness then in this chapter you have it a friend of his mum's and no other family. Love your writing though!

Oh my god you got the bloody cosmos is against us thing so right before it wven happened.

squeee! these two are just so dang cute and you wrote them so well. I hope you've got some oneshots or even another multi chapter fic of fitzsimmons... if not you should write some! gaaaaah now i'm left with so many feels cuz they. are. so. cutie!

Such a sweet story! Just the right amount of angst and romance. Great work.

So cute!

Really enjoyed it, looking forward to what comes next!

Why oh why hasn't there been an update?! I love this story! It has been getting me through Season 3 of Agents of Shield. How can they not be together yet?! You have captured them perfectly and brought them together in a completely believable way. Thank you so much for posting and I really hhope that there will be more to this story. (I'll be following it just in case) :)

Lovely story!

Oh my gosh! This fanfic is awesome! I really wish this could happen in the series. By the way, you write so well. ️

HONESTLY you are amazing and should be a writer of agents of shield instead. This should have happened oh my god. Please give me more of this!

Great story, glad how you ended it, and even more excited that you decided to continue in this story universe.

Good work.

Phew! It's about time! Honestly, everything leading up to this has been an agonizing, thrilling ride. Keep up the good work! Like, really, please. I love reading your rendition of FitzSimmons.

GOOD LORD I CANNOT EVEN. THE CUTENESS IS JUST TOO MUCH. BTW, this probably didn't have to be M rated, but I see why you made it so. BUT OH MY GOODNESS THE FITZSIMMONS CUTE IS JUST I CANNOT OEVEN WHAT THE HOW IS. FSDFH .CKJAHCBKASEACKJWEGF ;2FILUAE;O/Oo'a ; .
So, yea, I enjoyed it. Can't wait for more!~M

Gah. So good, omg. Wow. Thank you.

This was such a great story that I can't even find the right words to compliment it! So much emotion...brilliant, really. Great job!