IM CRYING THIS WAS FUCKING BEAUTIFUL! And my GOSH the emotional roller coaster this was, wow! I understand that the point was to make it realistic, and I think you definitely did your part in conveying that realism-based side of life. Alfred kinda pissed me off here and there, if only a little bit, but that is neither her nor thereI can’t seem to stay mad at him, especially since there’s a reason behind his madness. And on top of that, how could I hate him with THAT EPILOGUE THO! IT WAS GORGEOUS (lmfao just like Elizabeta’s soul mate) I definitely liked that it was from Arthur’s perspective this time, it gave me more insight and just made me love the Arthur and Alfred even more than what I thought was possible. Overall, great work!

I keep forgetting how much of an emotional journey this story is, so whenever I come back to it I end up crying in public. Congratulations.

I love love love this fanfic so much. It's really realistic and I like how Alfred isn't displayed as this happy-go-lucky oblivious guy but a normal human that goes through his own doubts too.
I love how the relationship between Matthew and Alfred is also complicated and not at the same time. This is one of the best fanfics I have ever read for UsUk and everything is just... y e s.
No words can coherently describe my absolute adoration for this amazing story. Thank you so much for this.

reading this fic again!

Oh. My. God. This fic was just beautiful in so many ways, I truly enjoyed it from the beginning to the happy, sappy conclusion.

I love that you clearly portrayed Alfred's insecurities and anxietes as lasting ailments that didn't magically go away when Arthur came into his life. I love that you developed Alfred's friendships wih Elizabeta and Kiku so well that I felt a rush of affection whenever the gang were together. I love that Arthur and Alfred didn't magically fall in love from the start, but instead developed their love for each other through trials and tribulations (I'm really into that, tbh). I love your realistic, relatable characterizations that illustrated different aspects of life. I love that you clearly put effort into making this Soulmates AU a believable, relatable world. I love that this felt like a great romance novel all along, and not an awkwardly established Hetalia AU.

I love this fic's greatness so much that I will remember reading this for quite a while.

You were still in high school when you wrote this?! Man, you are supremely talented. I can't wait to see what heights you will go to as an adult. If I one day see the name S.E. Mellark on a shelf of bestsellers, I won't be surprised in the least.

I won't say more, though. I'm sure someone else has already praised what must be praised about this glorious piece of fanfiction. :)

HA HA HAAAAA! -me trying imitato America’s laugh (sounding a bit like Santa Claus)

ice cream is and will always be, even in an apocalypse, the answer.

He remind me a bit of Romano in fanfiction

Alfred you bastard ‘Artie’ might’ve waited his whole life to meet you

This is so amazing! What a beautiful story! I love how Elizabeth meets her soul mate.

OMFG THIS STORY IS NOW ON MY LIST OF FAVOURITE USUK STORIES. You have no idea how perfect this is, it's out of this world, just the way it's like you planned everything from the first page. One of the best I've seen so far, keep writing more stories! :3
~Indi

oh I really loved how this story went, I was hooked from page one.

I read this, intrigued. I love the way it ended, very well closed up, even though it's so hard to do. I couldn't help but think of the song X&Y by Coldplay, the lyrics just fit to me. this is a lovely gem~

Ohmygosh, ohmygosh, ohmygosh!
I absolutely loved this!
I mean, the idea was original, I loved the friendship element between Kiku, Alfred and Elizabeta.
The ending was just perfect (although I am upset that it ended- I was enjoying it so much)
Your perception of Alfred was totally refreshing- it's nice to see a character go through an emotional change like that and I liked that he had backstory.
I found myself forgetting I was reading a Hetalia fanfiction. It felt like something you'd find in a published book.
Very good job- one of my all-time favourite stories. :3

Ahhhh you mentioned Dan Howell! .
That makes me so happy.
Anyways, this fic is totally great so far!