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GOODBYE,ILL ALWAYS REMEMBER THIS STORY!

YOU LEFT US OFF WITH A FRIGGIN CLIFFHANGER! EVERYTHING BOUT THIS CHAPPIE WAS COMPLETELY AMAZIN! I LOVED IT AND YOU ENDED OFF WITH SAKURA SAYING THAT! MWAAAAAAAAAA! YOU...
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ooh we learn that suki is a player AND sakura is falling for shoaran! its actually really obvious that sakura sooo likes him! :D after all this is a SxS story,aint it? I KNOW IN HE END wait... that wont work cause it the beginning shoaran says:the one... the girl that got away:but they're fallin for eachover! how can sakura get away if she's in love? maybe suki got away?... bad guess T.T hey, you didnt write jaa at the end! nway, this story is sort of getting better but still needs improvin. well, Ja Ne!

hello again! omg at the top when tomoyo laughed when shoaran said you knew that id be getting up too,didnt you? i was think tomoyos signature laugh: ohohohoho :D honestly i think this is not rushed BUT its happening slowly and not that exciting... O.O my sis is sooo annoying! i have these deck of cards that i hate but they're important because they're... cards with information... well she gave them to me i threw them into another room and this process repeats itself until she gave them to my mom and said:protect these from sars,she delibrately tried getting rid of them.: WHAT A TATTLETALE! WELL... Ja Ne... -.- my sister is the bes

im in a good mood and this was a REALLY GOOD chappie! anyways... OOH IM EXCITED TO SEE WHAT SAKURA'S GONNA SAY! im guessing that sakura is gonna wants shoaran ta beh her bfriend! n she is redy ta break his heart! 3 (I MEANT TO SPELLIT WRONG) 'nways, well Ja NE! ow, my sister pinched me... i dont care if the world will see this, i will probably delete this all no dont press the blu

I wish flames didnt exist but, i only have flames so ill try to pour as much waterr on them so they wont seem as... flamey...? i know i cant call it CC so i will call it... Honestly i think nothing really interesting is happening, if i quited the story now i wouldnt regret it. im quite bored with it actually. and hiro and meilein just say out of the blue:i think his true love is that sakura girl. i think that isnt very realistic AND i dont think his love for her is THAT obvious! well other than that OMG I USED TO HAVE A CAT I LOVED SOOOOO MUCH NAMED SUKI! IRONIC AINT IT, NE? i just read a story with a girl named ayumi and my sisters middle name is ayumi! (IRONICNESS HIT MY HEAD LIKE A STONE) well, Ja Ne!

I dont think your plan ,for one, is working with sakura changing guys... oooohhh meilin is also evil. no what everyone is just evil! ( smirk ) CC: dont want to hurt ppls feelings blah blah u heard it b4, ne? this chappie certainly was better than what u were doing but something needs to happen already. its kind of boring just waiting and waiting for something to happen...

PS:IM THE WORST FAN EVER!IM REPORTING FLAMES! T.T

umm.. lets see.. good things bout chappie... O_O honestly ( I DONT WANT TO HURT UR FEELINS! T.T )
I really... um... i honestly really didnt like this chappie! THERE I SAID IT HAPPY T.T I JUST FEEL LIKE STUFF IS REPEATING ITSELF! SHOARAN CONFIDENT AGAINST SAKURA, SAKURA GOT YET ANOTHER BOYFRIEND! i just feel like there needs to be something...different... (sobs O_O) i dont care if you send tomoyo to china,add eriol in the story or sakura messes up in her plan! just make something interesting PLZ (PUPPY EYES)
again: If I,Sarah,Hurt Anyones Feelings,Insulted Anyones Feelings,Made Anyone Cry, Or Did Anything To Make Someone Feel Down In The Dumps I Do Not Mean To Hurt Anyone Intentionally!please, i really am a fan of urs! well... Ja Ne...

Dear Sapphie, U ROCK! THIS STORY IS SO FRIGGGIN AMAZIN! i dont want any of my constructive criticism to hurt anyboby's i say something that hurts you,i dont mean it in any way! CC:Story is kind of getting boring, i suggest maybe a twist or or a fan girl comes in... im joking! (sweat drop) well just make something spark the plot! shoaran hasnt made any real move also.. well i just didnt feel my usual... excitment while reading this... GOMEN, GOMEN NE, GOMENASAI IF I HURT ANYONE, GOMENASAI TO THE WORLD!(scene from fruits basket .)

Constructive Criticism: Just before i start i just want to say in all my messages i don't mean to offend anyone or anything! kay, just wanted that cleared.:Just my opinion, i think in this chappie it felt like everything just repeated itself. sakura and david flirting, shoaran getting mad, tomoyo giving gossip. Just wanted to tell you! also, i honestly think things are going WAY too slow in sakura's plan but shoaran is getting to the point. Kay well, Ja Ne!

(sarcasm) HUH! YOU... YOU... SPELLED ''BYE'' AS ''BAI''! O_O WHY?! SUCH A HORRIBLE THING! (end of sarcasm.)I like this chappie a bunches! i cant wait to see sakura's plan unfold... (devil smirk...)

Sakura is so... evil...