I never thought someone could beat Violet in her bratty angst filled dramatic teenager act until I read your oc. She's so much worse and even tried to justify herself and just how awful she is.
'I'm nice because it's expected.'
'I dress slutty becuase I'm supposed to.'
Everything's just another excuse for her shitty attitude. While she tries to put other people in the on the spot by pointing out their issues so you don't notice how much she tries to be 'edgy' and 'bad'.
She's that teen that whines that nobody knows her or just how 'real' and 'badass' she really is.

this is a really good story the speech is nearly the same as the original but i feel like violet was portrayed as annoying and powerless but in the tv series she was cool and dark maybe give violet a little more power over things and also add some more back story to allison when i read this i feel like i dont really know the character well and that makes the story less interesting but anyway this is amazing

this is interesting

Please update this masterpiece! Finally somebody writes a story where the girl doesn't cry over everything

can you update this please it is a very good fanfic

Your OC made my brain cells commit suicide one by one,I mean she is literally the most retarded bitch I have ever seen.
She just sounds like your typical teenage brat.

excellent chapter update and i can not wait to read more soon please and thank you

Hahaha this is hilarious.

Update soon :) :)

And we got some cute Allison/Tate action at the end. Cute .
Thanks for updating, BlackUndertaker

loved the update! hope to see more soon

Can't wait to read the next chapter XD

worth the wait
update soon
:)
wonder how she'll react to thadeus
:)

Hey, I like how this is going. Your character Allison is a bit dark, but that's also cool. I'm curious about the whole killing thing. Normally, for a person, it wouldn't be something of a past time or casual stress relief. Not saying that's what your character is doing, just the tone of your writing seemed so nonchalant about it. Psychopaths don't feel bad about killing. Hmm, anyways. I love that she's just a year younger and has a hidden side that she covers with a mask.
Anyways I'll be following.
Thanks for writing, BlackUndertaker

I love how violet acts