This is so good! please continue

I really wish there was more of this and I'd found it sooner.

I'm enjoying this and I can't wait to read more. I was wondering do they all have to get tested to make sure they are all healthy on a regular basis...?

this is amazing

I love this story! I love the kink and the cute moments! I hope you write more!

Please continue! I need moreee!

I've never considered myself a perverd but now i do. Oh god i do. It was amazing like wow really. There're a lot of ppl who write smut but this was totally difgerent from anything i've read before and you nailed it. Really. Amazing. Can't wait ro read some more.
Have a nice day

Just found this story and read it all in one go.

Well, okay, I didn't *just* do it, I actually read it all a bit ago and then came back to review : 3 I had some things to do, y'see... (There's got to be some kind of female equivalent of the old 'something came up' joke but I can't think of one, which is disappointing...)

So yeah, it's super hot. I'm a huge fan of dirty talk in general and Grimmjow doing it in particular (this features prominently in some my own stories, most notably "The Arrancar Talks) so that's a nice bonus. And Grimmjow calling Ichigo 'kitten'? Yes. Oh, yes.

Characterization-wise: I absolutely love this submissive-but-fiery Ichigo-I think there's a shared feeling in this fandom that Ichigo is a kinky little slut waiting to happen BUT sometimes people can lose track of what he's actually like in the manga/anime because they want to see him give it up so badly. However that's what really hooked me on this story from the start is that Ichigo isn't too submissive here. That first fighting/sex scene is hot as hell, largely because Ichigo's not rolling over so easily.

Here's something else I like that comes through really clearly: There's this sense of a dividing line between 'real life' and their sex life, I think, that a lot of kinky people have. It's like 'yeah, sure, I want you to rough me up and call me a whore (or whatever) sometimes in the bedroom but that doesn't mean you can tell me what to do in my life any more than a partner typically can.' That is to say, the fact that this Ichigo likes what he likes doesn't take away from or conflict with the personality we all know from canon. It's perfectly consistent for him to be his surly firebrand self by day and an exhibitionist come-slut by night, and I really like how you do that here.

Plus his shyness/insecurity is adorable and very in-character.

Also, the sweetness and tentativeness of Ichigo and Grimmjow's feelings for each other juxtaposed with all that filthy public sex they are having is just such a wonderful combination that, in a way, is really key to what's interesting and appealing about the two of them together. There's the fierceness and the chemistry, but there's also the vulnerability and the sense of finding an unexpected connection.

Lastly, the ensemble cast. I just enjoy them so much haha, even the OCs. I got a charge out of their text conversation (and their usernames, I mean, matching upholstry? genius.) and the photo-taking scene, they really were funny. They really add a dose of lightness and fun into the story which is good.

And just in case you're taking suggestions/requests, I have two.
1. Ichigo tops Grimmjow, onstage or off (I see that you've hinted that this might be happening and I really hope it does.)
2. Aizen! As in, Aizen and Ichigo do a show together. Ooh, or Aizen's one of those 'private show' clients. Before Alpha was fully introduced I was hoping it was Aizen haha but of course it was Starrk-that totally makes sense, with the wolves and all. But Aizen... I think it would be interesting to see him here, maybe as a point of conflict? Like, maybe Grimmjow doesn't like him because he's known not to always play by the rules, to push people just a bit too far, but Ichigo won't be warned off because he's Ichigo. I wouldn't want anything too bad to happen, and judging by your emphasis on consent (yay for consent!), neither would you, but there's surely some room for things to get a little intense. But yeah, I'd love to see him as the cool, distant kind of Dom, maybe with a bit of a thing for toys, which would make a nice contrast to Grimmjow's heated, hands-on style.

Thank you for sharing this with your fellow Bleach pervs~

tastefully explicit and insanely erotic, this is so well written and amazing! please update soon, I'm dying to know what happens next.

tastefully explicit, insanely erotic and so well written! I live this story, I hope you update soon!

Senpai yes your are now my Senpai I pray you update soon I love this story so much u are so talented hon please I need my grimmichi yaoi fix sos sos please I need it ps I admire your work

I love this :) Grimmichi are so sweet together aww

Happy you're back! I love this chapter sooo much, Grimmy being all sweet and romantic is adorable :) also the librarian thing? Freaking awesome

Ahh, I'm so glad to see you back my dear! I know exactly what you mean by vanishing, school can be terrible xc I enjoyed the cutesy parts in this chapter and it was perfect refresher, I love all the smut but lawd I need recovery time too! I can't wait for the next chapter!

~May

Utterly Purrrrrfect BGM for this chapter! Hot and sexy just the way I LOVE it. THANK YOU for this amazing opening chapter.