You have redeemed yourself with the epilogue. I love my Jacob.

This is unrealistic, with Jake being so mean & out of character.

Ugh I just really dislike Jacob! So glad things worked out for everyone :D I wish Bella got her wish for more babies!

Is there a sequel?

I love love LOVE everything about this story!

I'm usually a Bellsper only reader, but figured I'd give this a chance. it was hot, and sweet and I like the idea of Paul and Bella. though if I'm honest, I don't think I can ever read Jasper with anyone but Bella. lol

Thank you for sharing.

I really enjoyed the story, but the whole Jake/Rae thing is really uncomfortable. Really good otherwise

I feel like there should be a jake/raven sequel. Love your writing style, wish you had more pack stories. Good work

Well, that's not a fair place to end this. :(

Will Jacob ever wise up and try to find a girl he isn't meant to have? Yes, this includes Raven... as well as it does Bella. Maybe if he finally imprinted on someone outside the tribe and who's heart doesn't belong to another. Lusting after a child of 14 is wrong... Jacob really needs to get a clue and be put into his place. Not only is she 14, but he is her pseudo uncle too... therefore, his thoughts shouldn't even be crossing the line into desire and lust.

Will Paul and Bella ever get to conceive more children? :(

Please let Raven imprint on someone other than Jacob.

Also, more of just Paul and Bella together would be nice... how they interact with each other, maybe some nostalgia of how they got to this point would be nice too.

I am pleased Charlie is happy and has moved on from Renee. I am also pleased he is in on the pack secret.

I know, I am asking for something that may never be, but one can hope. I would just like more out of this story... as it was enjoyable. :)

nooooo! it should be a crime for fanfic this good to be this short

Liking so far and I am only part way thru the chapter.

good chapter :):):):) good story :):):):)

good for Paul he got him kid and Bella :-) good chapter :):):):)

paul will kill him :-/ good chapter :):):):)