The story is great, even if it is unfinished. I think you can be proud of it

* glares at Vancha *
Haven't you noticed, there are a billion humans here?

I love your story, and I wonder if her first kiss is larten. I'll explain accidental kiss, like she all of a sudden trip and accidently kiss larten lol. Plus she would get embarrassed till she die. And that would be her first kiss. Lol XD

AAAAAAND You did NOT see the new chapter. I apologize, for anyone still checking up on this story. I'm writing most of my stuff on paper and typing it up, so I will have some new stuff up soon. I hope.

I must say...I like what I'm reading so far! (mind you the story is complete at the time of this review) I can't wait to read more!

WHAT!? *faints*
Fred: *faints gayley*

Yes... I am dead... But I am a skeleton with impeccable dress sense. Anywho I luurve luurve luurve that song it is awesom IMAGINE DRAGONS 4EVA WHOOOO! *waves hands in the air but one falls off* that was unexpected... *Fred kicks Lil* SERIOUSLY FRED THATS THE FIFTH TIME TODAY! ahem as always
Peace, Love and Chocolate
Lil xXx
IMMA KILL YOU FREDRICK!

Omg The cat is named after me i cannot believe it. I am freaking out over here. Oooh how about Russy goes to bring the cat back home but thiere all dead and Mr C is with her so he points out it was a Vampaneze XP

Update soon :-) :-)

HeHe... Oldies... Heh... *shakes head* What was i saying?... Oh Yeah! I cant wait till the next chapter and plez make a filler chapter where Russy says loads of slang words and Mr Crepsleys just like... \( 0_0)/ WTF?!
Anyways
Peace, Love and Chocolate
Lil xxx

Next chapter please !

Is that guy retarded or something? Nobody is that nice o.o anyways i luurve chu and dis storeh too (haha that sorta rhymed) i cannot wait until the next chaptah it will probs be epic-ah. I cant wait until she becomes a vampah. If she even does become a vampah! I love this story and you. {:O.
Lil xxx
P.S. *happy dance* hmm quite *posh voice*

Nice chapter :)

Loved the way she was all 'I hate you to' an he was like 'oooh mah face'. I laiks it and lobes it and lurves it nd such. WELL THAT WAS MY REVIEW! SORRY FOR SHOUTING IVE GOT SHOUTITIS :D

CGOMGWTF WHY DID YOU USE BABY BY JUSTIN BEIBER?! THAT SONG IS AWFUL!... Eeeeeuuuuuuuugh *shivers* you should have used Shipoopi from Family Guy *peter laugh*... Pooooooooookaaaaaaaaaaaaa (dear people who read the reviews, this is an inside joke, you wouldnt get it so talk to the hand (._. )-)