Reviews for Love Child
Anonymous chapter 21 . 7/14
Please continue with the story.. the suspense is killing me!
Itachi'sbabygirl1 chapter 21 . 5/23
There is no way its been almost 5 years and this story hasnt been uodated not once. Baby, I seriously need you to come back to this cause you left us seriously hanging. And now i dont know what to do with myself. I hope you're still alive and that you come back to finish this
ddaniploxx chapter 21 . 4/23
PLEASE FINISH THIS, IT'S SO CLOSE
Guest chapter 21 . 3/19
WHY? Why did you never finish this?
Kidkane chapter 1 . 8/29/2019
When I say I have read this story repeatedly, I have. This is an absolutely amazing story, fantastic read! You've really out done yourself with one of my favorite pairings, top notch really!~ I am anxiously waiting for the next released chapter, please be soon. :(
Guest chapter 21 . 8/22/2019
Hi Ray just wondering if you’re ever going to finish love child would love to hear how it ends
Guest chapter 21 . 7/27/2019
Love this !
Missambermarie chapter 21 . 9/25/2018
This is just amazing. Absolutely amazing and beautiful. I could go on and on. I love the way you write them and their emotions. The feelings of pregnancy between them are just so accurate. I need to read more! Please come back!
Goldglow chapter 17 . 9/8/2018
in my opinion Sakura doesn't deserve Yamato. Having a cheating lover is one of the most painful things anyone can ever experience, it's also one of the things you don't understand unless you go through it. Congratulations author-san, you've successfully made me hate Kakashi and Sakura. Here's your award for character assassination. Honto omedetō gozaimasu
Guest chapter 21 . 7/27/2018
Come back! Update please
Loulou713 chapter 21 . 7/5/2018
This is a really great fic! Lots of angst, really captivating plot. I wish when authors abandoned fics they would post a quick chapter at least highlighting how they pictured the story ending. I usually just try to make up my own ending.

For this fic... I think I’ll go with Sakura dying in childbirth. She chose Kakashi and finally let Yamato go. Kakashi raises his daughter (Sakura Rin) in the Hatake compound. Yamato helps him out when needed and the two have been able to become friends again.

Tsunade steps down as Hokage after they win the war, unable to shoulder the losses in the village and Sakura’s death. She begins traveling again, leaving Shizune as director of the hospital.

Naruto becomes Hokage and Kakashi serves on th advisory council for the village. He raises his daughter as a Shinobi, and though she has unbelievable talent brewing beneath the surface she chooses to only learn enough to protect herself. She instead focuses on medical chakra and at the age of 17 surpasses both her mother and Lady Tsunade as the greatest med nin in the history of the four great nations (Iwa has fallen).

Shikamaru marries a civilian girl whom he has some affection for but everyone knows she holds no candle to Ino in his heart. As calculating as he is he knows that is the most joy he can draw from this life and ino would want him to have something.

When his daughter is born he feels he finally is able to take a deep breath again.

Thanks RaeLee15 for creating this little universe in which to lose ourselves!
Revanchist21 chapter 21 . 3/28/2018
This story is very interesting, innovative and amazing! I really hope you will finish making more chapters in the near future soon since this story is getting good! Keep up the good work man! Hope you will have more chapters in the near future soon!
eminameow chapter 21 . 12/10/2017
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHH NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

UPDATE SOON PLEaaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Chelsey Thompson chapter 21 . 9/4/2017
Super disappointed that I started this story only to discover that 3.5 years late it is still not complete.
Guest chapter 21 . 7/25/2017
Hi. Hope Sakura makes up her mind, SOON. as for the hiatus, it got me really disappointed. u might consider co- authoring though to keep it going. i couldn't start the re: love child coz it still seems they're stuck in the same dillema and it'd seem to drag on too long already..thanks still hoping for the next chapter to come up. still a wonderful read esp if it gets done . Good luck!
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