The story may be dark, but darn there's a lot of hilarious in it...

And quidditch isn't just unbelievable, it's the most idiotic excuse for a game ever.

To AN, well they've modeled the train on a steam engine, and those can be a lot slower than modern engines. Sure, there have been some extremely high speed capable steam engines as well, but all it takes would be for wizards to base their steam engine on one meant for pulling heavy freight rather than a highspeed passenger hauler, and topspeed might be a quarter of what it could be.

So yeah, taking into account that wizards have absolutely no common sense? It's almost guaranteed that they picked the wrong type of engine and then copied it a bit too well. :)

lol, i think that's the most detailed attempt at figuring out the amount of gold in the vault i've ever seen.

In regards to your AN 2 and 3, the youngest known mother was 5 when giving birth. Both mother and child were fine and lived relatively normal lives. "Relatively" because the mother in question had a genetically caused hormonal issue that caused premature development that made it possible to become pregnant at age 4 at all and because the father of the child was definitely not on the proper side of the age line so to say.

"Nice" way of giving Snape a shock of decency. Only other beginning i've read that was even darker was Princess of the Blacks by Silently Watches, and that's only because of Jen being a seriously hardcore black witch on top of everything else, your Harriet definitely has the shittier side of it.

I REALLY hope you come back eventually to finish this story. A very unique and actually realistic take on how things would have gone if Harry is a girl.

An attractive and early blooming girl if she's already doing frisky activities with young boys and full grown men.

The author's note for chapter 13 reminded me that Harri is still a child and thinks like that. Very well done and a great chapter!

This story is just fantastic and extremely well written. This chapter(9) is particularly AMUSING!

I love the dolls and can't wait to find out more about them!

Its your fanfic you can do whatever you want if someone doesn’t like the way you have it than they can leave

CONGRATU-FUCKING-LATIONS

You did a great job doing this. A really good job.

I don't know when was the last time I've felt uncomfortable reading a story. You are going places bro.

Such an interesting, awesome, heartbreaking yet funny fanfic (her prank on the twins had me in tears with laughter). Love all the research and thought you put in. So many changes from such a small thing. Awesome work, thanks

Are you going to finish this story please doo I really like it

"Being a boy, after all, was what she wanted more than anything."

This revelation feels very abrupt. I may have skimmed over a line or two somewhere but, up until this point, it felt like, aside from the abuse, Harri was perfectly happy with being a girl.

Dear tkepner:

"…or the Christian Old Testament"… Okay, I'll bite. Did you have any specific passage in mind, or is this just one of those knee-jerk slurs that social-science types add to their writings without conscious thought? Because I'm racking my memory here, and I can't come up with a single verse that even remotely suggests that. (Especially not if I restrict myself to that portion of the Old Testament used *only* by Christians. I feel I should note this point, because, if you were trying to make insinuations about the Torah or the Hebrew Ketuvim, then any devout Jew who reads this has *two* reasons to be miffed at you.)

Sincerely,
Qoheleth

ok. Spelling: dessert with two ss.
Desert is a place with lots of sand and no trees.

ok. You make Dumbledore a narcisist. Whose plan is to have power by manipulating people to think he is the good and wise guy, and fun by watching idly. Hmph.