Reviews for Flaws
Extacy925 chapter 24 . 11/16/2014
That was wonderful I loved it great work.
tooyaluvr chapter 24 . 11/11/2014
Good story! It was written well. Keep up the good work.
abcd1255 chapter 8 . 11/11/2014
I'm so glad I continued reading (thanks to your PM)! Although the reasoning of making Draco Head Boy is still doubtful (even in the eyes of other Hogwarts students, which you pointed out in some previous chapter) - it does make sense. I know tons of people in the manager's position who would have done some "show offing" stunt just like that :-).
abcd1255 chapter 3 . 11/10/2014
Never understood why authors make Draco a Head Boy. That's the most illogical thing to do - for him being a Death Eater and all he must face trials and not being rewarded with the most prestigious position for a pupil in school. I understand that it's done for the sake of the plot - some sort of convention to make them (Draco and Hermione) to be closer to each other, but still... These sort of plots cause doubts in author's common sense and integrity.
Too bad. The start seemed like a decent piece of writing.
Finderfae chapter 3 . 10/29/2014
Have you ever been on a train in the UK? Maybe it's different on the Hogwarts Express, but those little compartments on British trains don't have tables and they don't have "backs". just two upholstered bench seats facing each other, seating six. If it's a whole prefects' CARRIAGE, then yes, there can be tables and a "back" area; the rest is open, like booths in a restaurant. I do love those old compartments, though; but they have not been used on regular trains in the UK for decades, though since the HE is an old steam train and the compartments have individual doors both inside and platform-side, it's clearly the exception.
DanceShoesNink916 chapter 22 . 9/25/2014
Great Story!
DanceShoesNink916 chapter 1 . 9/25/2014
Good start! 8th year theme? or will she be in her 7th...
Sora Loves Rain chapter 22 . 9/25/2014
Awe! They are so excited;) I love it:D can't wait till the next chapter:)
Sora Loves Rain chapter 21 . 9/6/2014
*Screaming with joy!* Hermione kissed Draco!;) You've made me a very happy girl!:D I'm so happy for them & they are going to the ball together...i'm so excited:) Thank you for updating & I can't wait till the next chapter:D
Guest chapter 20 . 8/31/2014
Awwwww, so sweet! You know, this is the first after-the-war story where Draco is neither locked up, killed, or immediately forgiven. It's a lot more realistic.
HallowRain8587 chapter 20 . 8/15/2014
Very good advise and working their way through prejudices. It is too bad that one set of prejudices get replaced with another. So glad that they are going to the ball together-it will help them all to move along.
Sora Loves Rain chapter 20 . 8/14/2014
Awe! He write a letter saying he was really sorry:) & she's going to say yes, to going to the ball with him;) can't wait till the next chapter:D
Sora Loves Rain chapter 19 . 8/14/2014
Poor Hermione's sad:( They really need to talk..
Honoria Granger chapter 19 . 8/7/2014
Oh, they're both such lunkheads...but it is an angsty fic and I'm all for the angst, so bring it on. Very nicely written.
Sora Loves Rain chapter 18 . 7/28/2014
Damn, I feel so bad for them both:( of course Ginny would tell everybody! I really want them to go to the ball together. Can't wait till the next chapter:)
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