That could have been a very unlucky birthday.

Elsa is making me so mad!

Update soon! I must stay til the ending.

ELSA GET AWAY FROM THEM. loooove it :DD

I knoooooow but ahahahhahahahhaha yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaas this is awesome!

I really liked this chapter, but I don't think that we should have heard that conversation between the girls, since Jack wasn't there.

They're moving quickly and have a tragic end; Romeo and Juliet seems to be a good fit.

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YOU TWO... GRRR JUT GO DO STUFFS ALREADY :D love it! thanks! (P.S. I love the way you described the girl's dresses! but Elsa you bleeeeeeeep)

so... hic's dead? he's gonna die?

I am enjoying the Disney references.

THE LIBRARY OH MY GAWD ITS A DREAM COME TRUE. this is just too perfect! (Hiccup why you gotta be so cheesy and adorable?!) and the realization thingy at the end...AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
*goes and dies*
Thank you...

Their love started off so sweetly. It's hurts to think about where it ends up.

PARTIES! my mom would totally be like that! and oooooh my goodness gracious, this is just pure amazingness. and A LIMO?! oh gosh, I would die if that happened! The party seems beautiful (and I like how you casually threw in that Frozen reference :P)

Just knowing what is going to happen to them is tearing my heart apart.

I am loving how this is written. Their story is already tragic and making me sad.

I really like how this prologue was written.