I think Tigerclaw might have a tiny crush on Princess

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Me: I can see what's happening

Cloudkit: what?

Me: and they don't have a clue

Cloudkit: who?

Me: they'll fall in love-

Cloudkit: eww

You should give Princess a warrior name.

you need to update

this is awesome but I need to know what happens please tigerclaw redeem yourself for fawnfur's sake

Oh geez I didn’t know you used fernpaw for half of the chapter I thought you used fawnpaw until now

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! OMSC So cute

Too cute please post again I love this too much I ship PrincessXTiger now!

Make more it was getting really good

I really think that you shoulder ship tigerclaw and fawnpaw

Not the best at reviewing but this was really good. Hopefully you come back and do more.

Oh and For Fawnfur's name I think it's jusr a bit too plain for her though it could just be me. For me I've pictured her as brave and determined. In the books she was determined to help her brother and the clan out and even though she didn't join the clan she was brave enough to trust Fireheart with her son who was still too young to even talk (was he a few days old?)

Oh but anyways what I was getting at is I think you should change her warrior name to Fawnspark or something like that.

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!I WAS HOPING SO BADLY THAT THIS WASN'T GOING TO BE A THING!WHYYYYYYYYY!?,!?

hahahaha...MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!x cough x Sorry,I can be liiiiiiitle !

this makes me cringe a bit. not cause it's bad or anything, but at the time everyone was already "meh" about "rusty" joining the clan. even cloudtail was a bit much. so much awkwardness here. :)