Okay besides the like awesome smut, the story is really good and I have to say I think you captured both Will and Hannibal perfectly, plus the detail and just the words it's really wonderful.

Needing a glass of water.

Well, I don't watch Hannibal and I don't even know who Will is. But since I like your other stories so much, I decided I ought to give this a chance as well.

I think this story is a lot darker than your other work. I have to confess I don't mind that at all. You found an intriguing way of building tension through conversation, rather than through action (although, in the end, the sex wasn't disappointing in the least).

All these food analogies have made me hungry. A bit of that Forêt Noire doesn't sound too bad now... :-)

umm...um...pheewwww, that was intense o_o forgive me, but my brain is having trouble forming sentences lol just know that this story was hot and I wish Will would give into his darkness like this in the show D:

aw...there is something SERIOUSLY wrong with me because i found this story so freaking awesome... obviously, it was hot but it was also cute in a loving way which only a true Hannibal fan could portray without completely tap-dancing all over the characters' personalities. therefore, kudos to u my friend, u did an excellent job! (the part about Italy had me melting and again, i'm seriously worried about the health of my mind...)

So you're bringing hannibal here in italy, uh? I can't wait! XD

Excellent chapter...i'm looking forwrd for ch 4!

Really great chapter! I was wondering if the beginning ("Art isn't just paint on canvas...") was quoted/ paraphrased from something else? As it is really great, and I would love to quote it in my art work (I'm doing a Fine Art degree). If it is yours, then wow! Great writing!

Keep up the good work! :)

Excellent chapter. Great story.

This was so good. Not just the events of course, but your writing as a whole is so good. And the conversation Hannibal and Will have in chapter 2 felt like a real conversation the characters would have on the show. Wonderful, wonderful job.

this was waaay to hot to already end after 2 chapters! pleeease write some more, absolutly loved every word of it!

More? Pretty please?
Absolutely perfect! One question: is it wrong from me if I hate Alana in this season? ;P

Kiss

Aghh that ending was almost hypnotic, I couldn't avert my eyes, it was so delectable to read. You my sweet lady or sir are a fantastic writer and I humbly thank you for this masterpiece. The only fault I found was that it ended far too short for my taste!

I love this... Do you think you'll continue? :D I'm desperately hoping you do because this is utterly fab.

I'm loving this *-*
you write really well, i can't wait for ch 3!

Great plot! I like this cruel Will very much