Reviews for Show me the magic
Artemis chapter 34 . 4/18
I love this story! You’re an amazing writer, I think you should write a sequel to this story, but I wouldn’t be opposed to reading a new story either I love how you really captured Peter’s gradual change in behavior as a hint to him changing his loyalty and how the other characters never suspected anything, as that’s how it really went in the original story. Sirius and Rain’s relationship I think especially is special seeing as he is such a playboy but chose to settle down with Rain, me I think that really signifies his change after being in a relationship with him. Can’t wait to read more!
xXallegedangelXx chapter 34 . 10/24/2019
It's been a while since I'd read this story so I read it all in one go and noticed in the end chapter Rain had been worrying about charms and I could've sworn her worst subject was Transfiguration up til now? Or has she perhaps just grown to understand transfiguration better?
Either way I love this story and I'd love a sequel! (Maybe an unexpected Rainius pregnancy? ;D)
- Angel. X
Love.Fiction.2020 chapter 34 . 10/12/2019
Loved it
BoysLikeGirls13 chapter 34 . 10/11/2019
OMG i thought it must be a dream. but you really put up a new chapter. and it was brilliant.. though a bit short. I'm for an sequel. I love rain and Sirius together and hope taht the next chapter wont take so long!
TWsos12345 chapter 33 . 12/10/2018
Omg I love this story! I have a lot of ideas running through my head. I think you should show them graduating and skip to them as adults at James and lily wedding. After, the 1st war should start and everyone joining the Order. Rain and Sirius should get closer. You should show James and Lily trying to struggle with having a normal life and raising Harry under Dumbledore’s order. The group secretly visit James and Lily. Show Peter secret going behind everyone back and him convincing Sirius to let him be the secret keeper instead. Skip to, Voldermort killing James of Lily and Sirius getting blamed and his confrontation with Peter. Rain should be the only one who believes Sirius didn’t do it and Remus should be the skeptical one. Remus should distance himself from everyone and just stay and work at the Ministry. Rain makes it her mission to free Suriius find Peter. She should learn this info when she goes and chats with Sirius. I think I really good surprising plot twist is that she finds out she pregnant with Sirius child after he goes to Azkaban. Also she should secretly watch over Harry but not shows herself in person until Hogwarts. She also not reveal who she to him until later when she helps him with the stone. This is just my idea that I think would be interesting to the story or the sequel. Please wrote more! :)
Heiress1305 chapter 33 . 6/28/2017
awesome! please update soon! that was soooo amazing!
Whoviangirl559 chapter 33 . 7/8/2016
Wedding plz!
Guest chapter 3 . 2/21/2016
PLEASE DO UPDATE! LIKE NOW! its a really good story
Love.Fiction.2020 chapter 33 . 2/10/2016
:D
thethreebirds chapter 33 . 2/9/2016
When I saw that you had updated, I literally jumped up and down. I hope you haven't been too stressed out. But thanks for taking the time to write such a great story!
FallenAngael007 chapter 33 . 2/9/2016
I definitely think you should include the Evans-Potter wedding and make some future plans for Rain and Sirius. Then make the sequel during Harry's time have a story about their reunion
HazelVex chapter 33 . 2/9/2016
As always it is a good chapter and I say with the sequel, you could do a prologue of where they're just facing joining the war or the end of it and then the first chapter could be Harry. But with Harry is it going to be AU? Or is Rain going to pull a Remus and go AWOL for a while?
Tina0609 chapter 33 . 2/8/2016
Loved it! They were so sweet together in this chapter :)
Well... I guess I'll be heartbroken anyway...so I want to see some plans for Sirius and Rain first, please.
moosegirl45 chapter 31 . 2/4/2016
Can't wait for the update! Love this story!
Smurficorn chapter 32 . 2/4/2016
So wow, just binge-read your story, can honestly says it's one of the best Sirius/oc fanfics ever. I hope you've not abandoned it, can't wait for more! :)
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