Wheres chapter 12 been waiting years

Great storyline looking forward too next chapters

Please continue this story

bro put more blood crimson and red u really need more of these colours on him please more ok? thanks :D!

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE THIS STORY IM BEGGING YOU

I love the story already and love how much I laughed in the first chapter alone lol

I think this is a rather good story so far and I respect your decisions in regards to the future, particularly the harem. You're not pairing him up with every 'hot girl' in the series (most of which are NOT hot) or every cliche pairing (like Karin), but someone whom actually fits with him, like Anko. While I don't know of your future plans, really the only other girls I could see being with him as he is in this story is perhaps Hana Inuzuka, because she is of course an Inuzuka and a less feral one at that, I would think her animal instincts (which are proven to exist in canon) would demand her to find a dominant Alpha. Kurotsuchi, because she's similar to Anko in terms of personality and not only one who won't tolerate Naruto's bullshit and stand up to him, but her elemental affinities would make her want to 'breed' with Naruto to enhance them in her offspring. I would also say either Hinata or Sakura because while they have completely different personalities, you do need polar opposites to counterbalance your own, not only that but as someone driven by instinct he's also going to want a female who is nurturing towards any future offspring, Sakura would actually be most fitting because she is just as fierce and independent as the other mentioned women, but also has a soft motherly side, I mean she DID risk her life to protect her man and her child in the Shin Uchiha arc of Boruto... then kicked said Uchiha's ass all over his man-cave. Also speaking from experience, my past relationships have lasted longer with women whom were polar opposites of me than women whom were like me, the former usually lasting years and the others lasting a couple of months at most.

I also think the bloodline is interesting besides the potential horns or tail bit... those seem a bit more outlandish than possible wings and scales. Particularly I'm envisioning his bloodline as something akin to Dragon Force from Fairy Tail and his appearance sounds a bit like Raizen from YuYu Hakusho, however due to the former, I think him growing wings would be more realistic than horns or a tail, just look at Natsu in the Dragon's Cry movie. I'm also curious if this bloodline will make him more naturally gifted for Senjutsu since it's a natural based bloodline, also will he be getting any summons, and if so, what kind? I can't picture Dragons in the Naruto world as that'd be too OP, like...

Gambunta: *Looks Up* Ah... balls.
Bahamut: *Looks down* Ah Balls is right Wart! Can you smell what
Bahamut is cooking?! Frog Legs!

Yeah, something like that. Maybe some kind of Monitor Lizard contract or the Salamander contract (even though the latter are amphibians). Maybe even the snakes since he's with Anko, imagine him and Manda meeting and the latter demanding sacrifices from a short-tempered dragon slayer... oh it would be hilarious!

As far as suggestions for the writing style and everything... I think you've got that covered, it's pretty well written. I do hope though that to go along with his foul temper, you have Naruto just curb-stomping everyone he crosses, I'm sorry for canon fans, but Madara and Orochimaru can have all the ninjutsu they want, it's not going to mean jack shit when someone with overwhelming monstrous power is grabbing you by the back of your head and slamming your face into the ground with enough force to crater it (Hence why I actually liked 'The Last' movie with Naruto just going full Kurama mode and smashing Tonrei's face into the freaking moon... ahhh, it was like watching Sairaorg Bael in DxD beating Issei's perverted ass like he owed him money while looking like a Boss). Oh BTW, I was REALLY impressed you didn't use Sakura as bashing material in the first chapter and used Ami as the vindictive fan-girl instead, that was actually quite clever and original of you, and actually caught me off guard, when I read the dialogue I was expecting Sakura's name to come up, but instead it was Ami, and it impressed me, a lot, that alone is refreshingly original since even in most NaruSaku fics, Sakura starts off a bitch.

great fanfiction wish there were more chapters

More chapters I love this one

Is there ever going to be an explanation about certain characters, like 'Monkey King'? Literally my first thought was 'Sayan'.
Also is Kira going to make a comeback? Is Naruto going to reveal or find more clan relics?
Do all the Konoha 12 exist?
Are we going to get some more information on Naruto's 10 years of self-trainning?
More encounters with future antagonists?
Are you going to explain why Naruto even has shirts when he doesn't wear them?
Are you going to update the story?

Loved it wish there was more

shame this is dead

bom.

A good story, and it has a very good plot. If you make a continuation or continue
the same story will be very cool and that the continuation is very makes you a great fanfic writer, and please continue the story.

Amazing