Reviews for Bottoms Up
Treehouse31 chapter 1 . 8/9/2015
John earned his tip - and then some! Whew! That was really something.

Loved the warmth and humor in this story. Now, going to find out about these drinks I've never heard of before...

Thanks!
sheshe073 chapter 1 . 12/21/2014
LAWWD HAVE MERCY THAT WAS JUST SO FREAKIN' HAWWT! Loved the tip Joss gave him, hahahah.
Can hardly wait for you to write another one like that.
odalys-ortiz chapter 1 . 10/11/2014
Man, I got drunk just reading this CaroXD
E.MorrowluvWordz chapter 1 . 9/6/2014
...awesomesauce
crypticnotions chapter 1 . 8/3/2014
Okay, wow. That was quite nice and hot. I enjoyed the bar tending part of the story as well though. What a great idea for a story. Very good and enjoyable. It wasn't hard to picture this scenario at all.
imo126 chapter 1 . 7/24/2014
This is too sweet, the seduction of John, simply overwhelming lol. The idea Doping it in this way, like it very much
Jossfan26 chapter 1 . 6/5/2014
That was another hot and sexy story. CF you never seems to let me down on a great Careese story. Keep it up girl!
mschessplayer chapter 1 . 5/24/2014
OH MY GOODNESS ! THIS IS SO HOT & SEXY...whew (fanning).
CarolinaGirl the pacing of this story is deliciously perfect; especially the way you did a bit of backstory showing our heroes have fully recovered and are now pursing a romance in addition to their continued work relationship. (Ahhh, squealing w/ joy).

I luv how Jocelyn challenges John. She makes him step up his game in every area. Her drunken, seductive drink orders and her encouraging tidbits to be a better bartender makes John adore her more. I really like how John kept his cool while getting Joss tipsy. He knew he was going to sex her when he called her to come over ("I've got exactly what you need and it's stiff too").

He's so alpha male: in complete control over her, even when she's seducing him. WOW, the shoes, the glass table, his visual seduction, his tongue, his fingers, his rhythm. OMG, I need an e-cigarette this story is so hot. I will re-read this story multiple times.

Very well done...actually it's scorching.
keangal chapter 1 . 5/23/2014
Great story. I miss these two together.
Thank you so very much.
stlouiegal chapter 1 . 5/17/2014
I really enjoyed your story. Sorry it took me so long to get to read it. I remembered you mentioned writing a story, about john going undercover as a bartender; from the poi chat. Joss was treading on rather thin ice. It seems that she thought up every sexual and smutty drink titles. She did accomplished her goal. She did totally distract john. A few drinks he didn't know how to make. Joss got her point across to john, that he has to stay alert, and not let any customer distract him, especially the ladies. Bravo you wrote their sex scenes, with taste. You were very descriptive, and I could visualize every move they made, every touch, and every kiss. It got very hot very quick. John gave joss all she had asked for. It was so good to joss, she had to get up and cook her man breakfast.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/15/2014
Oh. My. Goodness. This was HAWT! Whew! I needed a cigarette after reading it and I don't even smoke! Great job!
PiscesChikk chapter 1 . 5/15/2014
This was... whew! *fans self. This was amazing Cf, really. It had everything and I enjoyed it from beginning to end. I liked Carter's introspection at the start, I liked the playful banter between her and Reese and I liked that simmering attraction that you could just feel between them. It was funny when he was practicing his bartender skills and I liked that they were just having fun together at his place. It got sexier and sexier as did the drink names and I recognized a few! LOL loved loved loved the smut! Had to pause a few times, okay...it was very visual and well written. Great one shot overall. Adding to my faves list.
alliecattie chapter 1 . 5/11/2014
OMG! Need a fan man! HOT! HOT! Great storytelling too!
lemgirl1 chapter 1 . 5/9/2014
All I can say is wow, I'm not much of a drinker and half of those drinks I never heard before.
But would love to try half of them.
I have a couple of body parts rolling around in my head and wonder if they have drinks for them, just sayin'
Great story! :)
Chellero chapter 1 . 5/8/2014
So, listen, um, my birthday just passed but if you're interested in hooking me up with a belated written gift...LOL This was some serious hotness right here. SERIOUS. And a serious alcohol education. I mean, I haven't heard of nearly half of those drinks. :P But, seriously, I really appreciated the background info we got before the smut. So none of this hot sex was coming out of nowhere. Makes me appreciate the smut more. :) And those drinks previewing everything they ended up doing? Absolutely perfect. You did a fantastic job with this. So so good!
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