It slays me that this hasn't been updated in years. Do you have any intention to finish? What a cliffhanger that was, too...

*sobs uncontrollably* Whhhhhhhy! My imagination can’t fill in the rest! I know you’ll probably never finish it (or read this), but this was an amazing read. I really wish this had been a part of the show via curse and/or time portal. It fits so well! But, you know, it IS a family show.

I just can’t believe I found this story. I really hope you don’t leave it here. It just got to the good part

Whaaaaaaaaat?! Why is this the last chapter?! Omg PLEASE update soon! Love this story so much!

Freaking amazing! Please please update soon I NEED to know what happens next!

Interesting.

Omg this was amazing, I can't wait to see what Killian does? What is he thinking right now?! Need the updateeee!

Ahhhhhhh so good please update. You're amazing. I don't normally read incomplete stories because they tend to never be updated but yours just looked so good!

hahaha! Can't wait to see how Killian responds.

Well that was a swift getting rid of olivia.
No midwife for her? Poor lass.
I thought Emma was going to stay behind with her for a bit with the baby until Killian comes round to port again.
wow, to the kiss. That was a surprise. I hope Emma doesn't reveal herself just yet, I wish to see this play out and how the two of them deal with it.

Holy SHIT THAT WAS AMAZING AHH

OMG...OMG...OMG... OMFG ! EMMA KISSED KILLIAN :) This chapter was so wonderful and i was truly surprised at the end, i wsn't expecting that at all and i'm so glad. This was a major turning point fpr Killian and Emma. Lol, i can see Emma advoiding Killian and Killian may be confused as to what he is geel about his first mate and and that is going to be interesting to read !

Emma and Killian's adventure has just begun, that kiss was hot and i swear my jaw dropped when Emma said "Because you're mine" I screamed and was thinking "Damn Emma, you are bold and get it girl !"I am looking forward to the next update and i hope you feel better and take all the time you need when it comes to future updates. We are here for you and support you :)

OMG, OMG, OMG. SHE KISSED HIM! HOW JUST HOW? How just how? She has to reveal herself or else it's gonna get REALLY awkward. I can't even imagine Killian's thoughts now. Please update soon :)

Holy canolli, she kissed him! I can't wait to see what he does, please update again soon!

WOW! Very good cliffhanger and very well written story! At this point, an interaction bewteen Emma as Emma and Killian would be great, it's time for an explanation, hope she will drop the act now! Thank you for writing and sharing!