Love your writing, you really get into the head of the characters and is completely palpable.

I'm begging. Please, please PLEASE post more of this. We NEED it. Such a great story, well-written, as always, and you do Caryl like no other.

I sure wish you'd get inspired to come back to this story!

Please continue this story! I know it's been awhile but I've lucked upon it and think its amazing!

I love this really do and I hope you keep merle alive I really do

But when they reach the highway will sophia still run will merle be the one to chase her...

Will sophia know Daryl her real daddy before Daryl does?
Will you keep sophia alive in this I really hope so

Will the blood work at the cdc reveal to Daryl he has a daughter? Will Daryl cling to Sophia but push Carol away after all she has hurt him..and If it wasn't for the ZA and merle he would have never known his own child

Will he be to angered to forgive her die to her selfish ways causing his child to be around abuse and could have possibly been messed with?

Omg update soon please

Kinda want merle and Sophia to live I think merle is good especially once they reach neagan part

Oh what! We didn't even make it to Daryl's discovery! I need to remember my 'only read finished fic' rule.
I never post until I'm finished cause I know how difficult it can be. Been working on something for TWD for weeks and weeks but for me it's better to sit on it than leave people disappointed.

He doesn't know it's her because he won't look any woman in the eye... Ouch. Heart bandaid required!

Slightly worried that this is only 5 chapters. Is it incomplete? I read another of your fics and then clicked this without checking! I need it to be finished!

Great beginning. Your choice of language when describing their sexual encounter was pleasantly disarming. Not how I usually think about things but straight to the point. A great read. Then the rest... The explained connection and Merle's knowledge! All good!

I just re-read this entire story, and I'm hoping beyond hope that your muse returns and you can continue. This is just so wonderful, I've loved the idea since you first mentioned it and I miss your impeccable talent. You have a knack for Caryl like no other.

Oh how I love brother Merle.

Love this story and love how merle is in here please keep him alive and with them

I can't wait for Daryl to finally realize who she is but I sense he will after he says some very mean hurtful words towards her and then realisation hits him

Love your story so far and I can't wait to see where you will take it! Hopefully inspiration to come to you soon so you can finish it. :)

I would love to see more of this. Especially Daryl and Carol. Merle's arm and shoulder are really going to give them some problems I sure hope it doesn't get a bone infection. That can be ugly.

Ohhhhh so good!
~Crystal

I'm really struggling to find the words to describe how fantastic this fic is. It's beautifully written and the plot is so original, sucked me in right from the start. The characters are so rich true to form and the whole thing is just so engaging, I've loved every moment so far and can only imagine what is to come. I'm dying to see Daryl spend time with Sophia, to see him realise who Carol is and for what the consequences of that realisation will be. From what I've read so far, I know it's gonna be good. I know you've said you've been struggling to write for this fic and I get where you're coming from as I'm going through the same thing and there's nothing more frustrating, so I won't demand that you update. Instead I'll simply say that I hope you find your inspiration again and feel able to continue this truly wonderful story :)