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maybealy chapter 1 . 6/18 Did you ever upload this story anywhere else? |
acnayokpuk chapter 1 . 1/3/2018 Excuse me, I would like to read it... |
DEVAN chapter 1 . 10/31/2016 PUT IT BACK UP PLEASE I HAVE BEEN DYING TO READ THIS |
MisZ AnArchy chapter 1 . 7/15/2015 I am glad that I could read this story! You are one amazing writer and I love your stories to death! This was the second story of you that I read and I could not put it down! Good luck and congrats! |
nonsensicalmeanings chapter 1 . 6/19/2015 So, I was going through my goodreads page and boom there it was. I didn't even know that you have already published this but congratulations! I am so happy for you! And having a fan girl moment right now. Um. Excuse me while I squeal over there at the corner. |
anon chapter 1 . 4/27/2015 pls re upload the story here |
PattyCake17 chapter 1 . 2/2/2015 Good work with this story. Glad I read it here first . I voted for your book at Kindle Scout. Hope it works out for you. I will still buy it if you get chosen for publication. Good luck! |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/26/2015 I knew I shouldn't have procrastinated the epilogue. Was literally right at Elenas graduation proposal scene, went to tend to my son and came back to it gone. Cried for a moment because I shared this story with three of my closest friends. Shared excerpts and even full chapters for others to read. You are a talented writer and I am blessed to have read such an amazing story. |
Dhorcas chapter 1 . 1/24/2015 Hi! I'm so happy for you but I'm so sooooo sorry for me, well a bit disappointed! I just found this great story yesterday! And I've been reading it like crazy all day but I just got to chapter 16 and when I tried to move to chapter 17, this error message showed up, arggggggg. I'm reading from the UK and it's 2.30 AM here, I was staying up just to finish the story. I'm seriously considering a nervous breakdown now… :'( In any case, thanks for your amazing stories and the best of lucks! |
Emmalovesdimitri chapter 24 . 1/4/2015 AMAZING! Haven't read many VD stories but this is one of the best I've read! |
Marrilyn chapter 24 . 12/15/2014 I like it that Elena's the one to propose. Her speech as just fucking perfect, the whole scene was fucking perfect. I love it! Too bad the story is done because a few more chapters wouldn't hurt, though the ending is just amazing. |
Marrilyn chapter 23 . 12/15/2014 Why is it that no one finds it troubling that Grayson just threatened to shoot Damon? I would've called the police. There's disagreeing with something and there's murder threats. A judge should know that. And Elena being afraid of them? I don't doubt there's abuse involved if she's afraid of her own parents. It's funny how Damon gave up his dream yet Elena doesn't have the guts to do the same. That bitch. That shower scene was ridiculously hot. I LOVED every second of it, adored it. It was just pure perfection! You write love scenes so well and make us readers feel so good reading them. |
Marrilyn chapter 22 . 12/15/2014 I really like Damon and Caroline's relationship here. It's sweet how they're so family-like, especially since in the latest episode she finally gave in and admitted Damon has always been there for Elena. Damon really shouldn't feel guilty for choosing work and money. Elena as the first to make the choice of school over him. It's simply payback, nothing else. |
Marrilyn chapter 21 . 12/15/2014 I am so sick of Elena and her choosing school over Damon. I take back what I said: Damon refusing to answer the phone and getting a new number weren't dick moves on his part. She's the one who decided to leave. She could've gone to college in her town. They're just classes, what's it matter if it's here or in another state? She was selfish, and she was selfish for herself, not for him. Bitch had everything coming. Excuse me, Elena. He left you? Wasn't it the other way around? He wasn't the one who moved to a different fucking state, and for what exactly? Dancing? You could've done it in your own town. Doesn't feel nice that he has to go now, does it, when it's always you leaving, Elena? |
Marrilyn chapter 19 . 12/14/2014 Refusing to answer? Changing your phone number? Dick moves, Damon. Seriously. What was also a dick move was Elena never introducing him to anyone hers. Bitchy. Congrats to Damon on graduating! I knew he could do it, never doubted him. |