Its a good story and I can't twait to see Elsa's reaction when she finds out who Jack really is

;_; you're a beautiful writer. I hope you find the inspiration to continue this. I love you.

Please update its been sooooooo long!

Aw, Jack gave her his staff! That's so sweet! Too bad he's still lying to her about his identity though, he's bound to regret that decision later. Great work so far, I will be looking forward to reading more! 83

I love it! I hope you continue writing this because it looks like its going to be a really good story. Poor King Frost, he makes me sad. I like how you mentioned the bit about his sister growing up and forgetting about him. There is something that is slowly confusing, okay so maybe I missread it, but Elsa has met King Frost, and she saw him, then doesn't this Jack look like him too? that doesnt make her slightly suscipious? if they look so much alike? or maybe she didn't see his features last time...hmmm.

I do like that Jack is still Jack even though he is a King. He still has that playfulness about him and that lingering sadness. Nice.

Well can't wait to see how this develops. Hope you continue to write and update. :D

I just found the story and I really like it x) it's so good so far. Can't wait for the next chapter., good job :)

Loved it so far!

keep it up \;P

Oh, this was so cute! I love it!

Your writing is beautiful :)
I love it (:

Cute! I love it! Please write more!

The staff should turn into something that's suitable for her...

more please

Gah! Update! This is so cutee!

I adore this story to pieces! I started reading it on tumblr and only just discovered it was on fanfciton which is much better coz now I can review and know instantly when this charming delight updates :D xx

Great work. Its a really intriguing and an interesting read and I look forward to reading more. xx