Sorry I made a mistake what I wanted to say in my last review was o my fucking god I love this story really it was great though I was a little lost on some parts for example is rin still trying to become a paliden and how did kuro die and I would have liked it if maybe we got a POV on why Yukio would do what he did it seem like there was a lot of mentioning of things we didn’t see but still great story.

Lol! Mephisto is so blunt.

Oh my! Your stories got me so addicted! Thank you for the time spent in planning out the story! I am really amazed at how much thought you put into crafting the story and how each chapter is so long, every chapter is quite a delicious read! Keep up your good work and I am looking forward to read more from you! :)

Favorite quote of the chapter : "I'm sorry, I wish I could make people not act like morons"

I also just wanted to say that I really appreciate all the time, plotting, character development, and heart you put in to this story. It is well balanced and well crafted, and I consider it a jewel among fanfictions, even more so in this fandom. It's a treat and I look forward to being a faithful reader of your stories!

Okay, I now officially ship AmaimonXShiemi.

AHAHAHAHHAHAHAHA! I LOVE IT! ANGEL IS AMAZING! I LOVE HOW THE COURT THOUGHT THAT BON AND RIN WOULD GET IN TROUBLE FOR RIN USING THE BLUE FLAMES BUT THEN ANGEL'S LIKE 'LOL NOPE!'

Ya know...he sounded like was thinking about raping him in the end...

Still, great story! Love how your plot develops. Amaimon and Meliphisto are adorable in their big brother role and protecting Rin~

I'm speechless. Beautiful end.

I really like how Amaimon is being portrayed in this story! It's very unique!

So, Sheimi and Shima are currently awol going of who knows where, although in guessing Brazil, Rin is now bound to Bon, and Angel of all people had really positive character development. And, miraculously, you didn't fall into the common trap of making it happen to soon and had his change slow.
Awesome story! :)

Beautiful end

I LOVE THIS.

Great.
That is just something the Gregori (and Angel) will want to hear, I think.
Because, with this, they have NOTHING as a "prove" against Rin any more.

Rin and the little fox princess.
Shiemi and the Earth King.

I only say

"Love is ion the air"

thx

Quinn

Nice.
The whole chapter was great