Sad to see this dead, it is such a cute story. When Rubys phobe died I almost fell out of my chair laughing having had that exact scenario (with different words) happen to me a couple years ago lol. Good luck on your ventures partner.

Was goo while it lasted

I'm sad to see this end, but I had a lot of fun with it! The characters were very well written, the entire thing was actually! I'm not sure where you are now but I hope you're doing well in writing and life

Man, that was a timeskip and a half. Kinda lame, honestly. Would have liked more character moments, more relationship building before we got here.

Another chapter or two, nothing more.

This is wonderful ! I instantly fell in love only by looking at the title. You are such a good storyteller. It is ashame that you won’t continue, I loved it known the less.

Probably pure coincidence but your story was the one that finally broke me and I attempted writing whiterose fanfiction for the first time so like thanks you inspired me and ill always remember your fic as the one that pushed me to wrote my own thanks and thanks again

Alright so... This story is absolutely amazing. It sucks that you stopped it, but that's your choice and I'm not gonna bug you about it. I found it yesterday, and ended up staying up till 2 in the morning reading your fanfics. I didn't even realize how old this was until I looked at some of the other reviews. I also lost my train of thought while writing this. Uhhhhhh anyways good stuff, I'm awkward, gonna stop writing this now.

Well, even if you're not continuing, thanks for writing such a great story up until this point! It was so cute, I loved I so much~ whiteroses still my favorite paring, even though if anything bumblebee is the gay that has the biggest chance of get in realized in canon. Hopefully they start focusing on ruby more in volume 6, cause for a main character, they're sure neglecting her for character development. I hope you're doing well, even though you last published this like 4 years ago. Maybe if ruby starts getting better character development again, a little of the magic of whiterose might come back to you. But if not, that's OK to. I wish you luck in life~! You've honestly made me smile so much in the past 2 ours of so it took MW to read this. Thanks!

I have to say that this fic was well done. I am a huge romance fan for bothe fluff and lemons but I hate it when a story is nothing but a fluff or lemon with no plot or story. This story however is a perfect example of a fluff fic with plot. I never reread a story. But this one I have reread multiple times because it has a perfect image of what team RWBY would be like in a normal world without Grimm or dust. Well done man well done.

I love this story and I actually cried when I found out it was last updated in 2014

La Rose Blanche... I couldn't have been the only one that caught that... It literally means the White Rose... Good touch! :D

This is so good! Oh my gods I absolutely love this story and your writing style is so unique and amazing and honestly kind of reminds me of my own a bit. Also Paralyzer? Good choice.

Hello! Hi, I know I'm very late here... I will assume that you will never see this. Thank you so much, I can see you lost interest in the story, that's fine... well I cried a little last night. But I'm ok now. I wanna say that this was amazing, I hope your still active. I wanna get involved with your work. I am very knew to the White Rose fanfics. I look forward to seeing more of what you do.

where's the next chapter? i enjoyed reading it and i can say i love the story so far jsut need some more and a good finish! :D so i hope you'll pick up this story when you get time of course 3

Hey, sorry for the random comment, but I just started reading and I wanted to say this. Your story is amazing, and you should keep writing with as much vigor as the first chapter, which I just finished reading, but anyways, I also wanted to thank you and your beta for bringing us of the RWBY fanbase this amazing story about hardship and love, while making it fun and enjoyable to. So I can't wait for the next piece, weather it is part of this, or a different story.