guess this corvo guy is gonna get paired up with chrysalis ah well that's fine hey think you could do one with the dazzlings next? I'm thinking a three girl harem with this guy corvo x adagio x aria x sonata sounds like a good idea for a story right?

hay update this story heheheheeheh(hay)

I think you should of keeper this going I like it

You need to keep wrighting this story I've liked it so far so keep on going. I understand if you got other story to right but I think you should keep up with this story

Good and can't wait for more chaps, this story is good and I find no grammar errors.

Huh. Chrysalis being paired with corvo. Well fuck yeah, I'm behind this all the way! Great story man, keep the great work coming!