I love this story, it was so cute! Great writing

R.I.P. Alarose you wrote an amazing story and while it is a great shame that you died, before its completion we will remember it and you in some memory of fondness... Alt17

this is Wonderful they even look similar and i love the idea of him realizing there i more to life than himself an actually become nice

... Sad... Too sad.. So nice. Poor harry

Really Great!

Awesome story! I'm just wondering, I this an opening for a multi-chap? I mean, it's great just as a one-shot, but adding on to it might make it even better. When I first heard that Billy's uncle's name was Dudley, I had a similar idea. After all, Dudley can't be all that common of a name. (Is it? I've never met someone named Dudley.)

I think you should write a multi chapter fic starting from here! This is an excellent idea! Maybe where he accidentally uses magic in front of the league when he's billy batson or someone recognises the Harry looks on him and he's all confused and stuff and Dudley tries to explain. I don't know, I just know that from your writing and your style, it would be very hard to go wrong!

Cool

This could be a great start up for a longer story if you wanted to

This is sad but I like how you did this story any way !

The Crimson Mage.

What about Billy's twin sister