Reviews for Burn
SelfAware chapter 10 . 3/22/2017
Considering I recently finished Lights in the Sky in 1 binge, this is weird. But I like it!
Kirsah chapter 1 . 4/14/2016
Geez, James ... maybe knock, or holler, or something like that if you forgot your bag instead of just barging in on friends. Especially if you have a crush on one of them and know that they are together.

And yeah, that was definitely a mood killer! You caught their embarrassment perfectly. It's a situation nobody wants to be in, but I think it was doubly bad for James.
Nefaria Darksoul chapter 10 . 3/31/2016
I loved this sooooooooooo much.
Nefaria Darksoul chapter 3 . 3/31/2016
Loving this. You say poor James. I say poor Cortez, lol. He is such a lovable, let's all get along and sing koombaya kind of guy to be caught in the middle of James who is emotional and volatile and Kaidan who knows he kissed his woman. All the whole I'm gleefully yelling fight, fight!
GoddessTiera chapter 10 . 2/15/2016
3 3 I am such Shenko trash. Loved this.
GoddessTiera chapter 9 . 2/15/2016
Oh no. Danggit Shep.
GoddessTiera chapter 8 . 2/15/2016
Glad they were able to talk like adults finally.
GoddessTiera chapter 7 . 2/15/2016
Oh man. How can words on a screen have my stomach in knots? Ahh
GoddessTiera chapter 6 . 2/15/2016
I fully believe that is exactly how Kaidan's temper is when he snaps. He keeps such a tight control on himself that once he finally hits that breaking point, he explodes.
GoddessTiera chapter 5 . 2/15/2016
It is always nice to see Shepard breaking down. Not because you want them to suffer but because they feel more real and relatable.
GoddessTiera chapter 4 . 2/15/2016
*sigh* 3 3
GoddessTiera chapter 3 . 2/15/2016
Man this situation is a powder keg. I am so nervous waiting for it to blow up.
GoddessTiera chapter 2 . 2/15/2016
So many emotions. You always do such a good job with making me feel all the emotions.
GoddessTiera chapter 1 . 2/15/2016
Poor James. Terrible way to find out.
TaiKee chapter 6 . 1/7/2016
Honestly, if I were Kaidan I'd dump her ass and let them have each other. I don't really buy her bull excuse about the kiss, if she didn't want it she could have stopped it. I really don't like Shepard and James in this story. But the fact you can raise those type of emotions means you're a great writer!

I don't blame Kaidan for walking out. But I just think he should have walked out and not looked back. I have mentioned I gave issues with cheating and stuff though, right?

Really good chapter though. Really good.
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