come give me the next chapter I need to know what happens between these two, oh and please make it an Abe top and Mihashi bottom.

I'm so happy that you wrote more chapters for this story! I had really liked it when you first wrote it but kinda forgot about this pairing until I started to retread the manga and then I saw you had new chapters! I really hope that Abe can finally make a move soon with Mihashi that isn't part if a dream. I hope that you update soon because I really want to know what happens next between them! Thanx so much for continuing it! Bye!

So cute!

MORE PLEASE

First of all, I'd like to to tell how awesome of a job you're doing with your writing. The characterization of the characters is spot on and I think this is something I could read over and over again. Also, since you mentioned constructive criticism is welcome I thought I should mention a couple things that might make this already very well written piece slightly better. Firstly, your use of contractions. I don't know if you prefer not to use them, which is fine, but I've found that the story flows better when you use them, and secondly, for dream sequences and such it's incredibly helpful to have them in italics to have some way to differentiate it from the rest of your writing. Other than that, just watch out for a couple grammar errors (which I often only find after I publish a chapter) and your good to go! Keep up the good work author and I look forward to the update for this story!

wow i loved this! Mihashi and Abe's characters are very accurate, it's great! keep updating 3

omg this is awesome! I loved the twist here it was so funny! keep it up!

That was so adorable! The Mihashi-bird was awesome too.

Queenie

I love how each chapter is already fantastic on its own and can be read so fluidly, but together make up an even better story! You're doing a great job gradually improving their relationship rather than jumping right into it like so many authors do.

Queenie

In the manga, these two actually did have to cook together. Ah, the possiblities! And this was one of them XD Abe was such a drama queen in the beginning.

Queenie

I like how lonely Abe seems, that really fits his prickly personality.
Thank you for the lovely fic!

Oh my God i can't. Im dying. This was just amazing. That dream my bid

Loving the story so far... Can't wait for more...

Haha XD I love it! Please write more!

That dream was quite accurate to how my dreams are actually, except with less crossdressing people. I'm not that awesome yet. Anyways, great story so far! I like how it only focuses on their relationship and lets that drive the plot along. Abe's all grown up this chapter!

Queenie