Reviews for Breathless
iLoveFreeDom chapter 9 . 9/26/2014
Please update? :( I need to read more of this! It's just too good! Please?! It's been a while since you updated. Unless... it's finished... but it didn't say completed so... Update! :D
Aj chapter 9 . 9/21/2014
Hey, what happened to Lauren and Lily continuation? If you haven't considered doing one please do.
lemon-rind chapter 9 . 9/13/2014
Not bad. I found the Karma text deletion incident a bit too soap opera, but overall this was quite the touching read. I'm not quite sure if you're updating again, but thanks for the story. It's pretty damn good.
Andy.T.M chapter 9 . 7/16/2014
I love it plz plz plz write a fanfic about Lauren and lili
Aj chapter 9 . 7/6/2014
Well, if this isn't an interesting turn over events. I am definetly interest in you doing a story about( liuren I ship it, lol:)) Lauren and lily because I like the soft sides of Lauren and because I like this Lily character especially after I found out that she is genuine. I'm interested in Lily's background and Lauren's too and I want to find out why both characters is the way they is.
kenfromnhus chapter 9 . 7/7/2014
I like Lauren and Lily as a couple. They could double date with Amy and Karma.
LaurenKnight13 chapter 9 . 7/7/2014
Omg... I So want a Lauren fic... and her and Lily getting together will make me very happy. I cant wait to read the spin off. Please make sure to say its a spin off from breathless so I definitely read it. I love that Lauren takes care of Lily. And Amy said she hopes Lily finds someone to take care of her like she does with Karma. If only they both knew Lauren was right there under her nose all this time. I hope they help each other be better.
BubblesGreen chapter 9 . 7/6/2014
What a great story!
CarpeDee.m chapter 9 . 7/6/2014
oh mah gawwwwwwwwwwwsshhhh. my tears... what type of cliffhangerish ending.. omg. thank u for updating btw :)
Guest chapter 8 . 6/15/2014
IM GONNA DIE IF YOU XONT UPDATE
bri chapter 5 . 6/5/2014
awesome keep going amy karma 4life
Ajc chapter 8 . 5/30/2014
Well, I can't say I'm disappointed with the story or the way the way you plan on ending it, but I am disappointed that its so short. I think you should continue, if you can, and incorporate ( I don't even know what that means, well, I have a idea, but should still look it up)Lily and Laurens background into the story, because even though I love Karmy I still want to get to know the other characters, and that includes Lauren and Lily.
Guest chapter 8 . 5/29/2014
omg finally! anx i think i see where your goin with lily and Lauren. and iike it!
Toddynha chapter 8 . 5/30/2014
ownnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn *_*
broadwaybound2016 chapter 8 . 5/29/2014
AHHHHH AMAZING THANK YOU AMY FOR FORGIVING KARMA LOL! PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!
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