I know it's been 3 years since you last updated but i can't help but say: you should update it! It's got an amazing plot with good wrighting and character development. It's really sad you stoped wrighting this fanfiction but you should know that if you ever choose to continue it's never too late to update and that you have a big fan in me waiting to see what happens!

Nuu i need more i have to find out what happens MarcoxAce needs to happen begging

Omg! This is so good! Why on earth did you stop?! Sorry, hahaha it's killing me that you've left it here. It's been a while, but if you ever read this message pleeeaseee update. I just love the way you portray Ace and Marco, and the way you make his illness seem so realistic, like the descriptions of his feelings/ physical condition etc. This is probably one of my favourite one piece Ace fanfictions that I've read, please, please continue.

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You said 'to be continued' almost a year ago. When ya gonna update, plz do so soon. *begs with Luffy puppy eyes*

Hello I like this story. It is well written. I love ace he is my favorite character. I have a question is this a ace x Marco story or not because I would love this story even more if it was

Can't wait for the next chapter! I'd like to find out what kind of poison it was the bounty hunter had used, and maybe have any survivors from their group attack again. I think that'd be cool, but do whatever you want with the story. This is going along really well!

Awww, poor Ace.

The descriptions you used in this chapter are especially realistic, well done :) I got so into the story that I read the whole thing in one go, I just couldn't stop till I found out what was going to happen to Ace. Which is why I'm going to beg you now, please don't stop there, please update when you can. Thank you for the good read x

I really hope you'll continue this story soon, I want Ace to get better, but at the same time I want him to keep suffering so we get to see more of worried/over protective Marco and more fluff... Help me, the only way to fix this is by getting a new chapter.

I Ace gets better soon:/ great story!

Ahhh your such a good writer

thanks for the new ch! Appreciate it!

Oh my glob! Him hiding the attack is going to do more harm then good, right? I love this!

I love this!
marco, how could you!?
this was very exciting and thrilling! i really enjoyed reading it!
please update as soon as possible! ;)