Damn I’m mad my one shot fanfic about Serena was more or less on par . She’s motivated by self interest. Misty is in danger , ash is in danger . the guy she claims she’s in love with but the minute he tells her the truth she dips . How are you this immature and in your feelings that you forgetting there are lives on the line including his. Love means being able to let them go . Love isn’t being motivated by only impressing them. Lol I don’t like Serena anyone whose read the one shot knows I can’t stand her . I like characters who are more then what they appear to be. I watched two episodes with her and wanted to quit.

"My parents are getting a divorce." "A divorce?" "I'm sorry." "Thank you for your apology." "Sometimes, it's good, the best or better if adults divorce. Other times, it's bad, the worst or worse if adults divorce." "No kidding."

"My parents are getting a divorce." "A divorce?"

Hey will ya teach me how to write awesome stories like this one?
And you did a gr8 job making Paul a villian. Boy I hated him.
And thanks for not making it Armour shipping! I hate Serena!
And you are right. Ash and Misty are meant to be together!

Hey young Man, did you ever happen to read Heroes of Olympus?

Jessie James and Meowth!

Me gusta tu historia y continúa con la secuela

Team Rocket Agent 009 Domino
The name Domino as well as the fact that she is Agent 009 reminds me of Domino in the 1965 British spy movie, "Thunderball", the 4th movie in a series starring Agent 007 James Bond. A potential reference maybe?

Jessie and James - "Jessie James"
Butch and Cassidy - "Butch Cassidy"
Anne and Oakley - "Anne Oakley"

Good

XD The sequel update's funny (totally not laughing at your suffering, MarioBoss365. Okay, I admit it. I plead guilty of laughing at you) Anyways, this fanfic is REALLY one of the best PokeShipping fanfics I ever read. And, it's also one of my favorites of all time 'cause the storyline's not rushed (unlike my fanfic) and had several elements besides romance, like adventure (it already counts, considering one of the categories of this fanfiction is adventure) and slight humor. By the way, can't wait for the sequel!
~HildaMirage1013

I knew it was Paul once you told us about the Electivire, which Paul owns, and Dawn also noticed he's been strange!

I love how Jessie, James and Meowth refer to Ash and his friends as "_ Twerp" or "_ Twerpette".

Ash - "The Twerp"
Misty - Twerpette with Red Hair
Brock - Cooking Twerp
Tracey - Sketching Twerp
Max - Mini Twerp
May - Hoenn Region Twerpette with the Bandana
Dawn - Sinnoh Region Twerpette with the Blue Hair
Gary - Original Rival Twerp
Clemont - Inventing Twerp
Bonnie - Mini Twerpette
Serena - Straw Hat Twerpette

Omg! I loved your fanfic, I thought the villain was gonna be Rudy and I wasn't really disappointed when it wasn't. i loved how your story wasn't predictable and I can't wait door the second installment

Looking forward to the sequel