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I can’t believe I’ve never read this before! I loved it! Especially the angst and resulting resolution between Emma and Killian. And that line you ended with about Emma being overdue for a happy ending? Too true!

Love. This.

I love it! How they were all protected from true love and the concept was so amazing! And Emma was in love with Killian and didn't understand why he just backed off and he was wondering why she didn't approach him either. So they both were just kinda avoiding the topic but this certainly helped matters! Absolutely amazing, thanks so much!

This was hilarious but also kinda heartbreaking because ugh, they are such idiots! And how you managed to mix those thing I'd never know but the result was amaaaazing!

This was so good! Absolutely wonderful! I was looking for something a little lighter and found it and I am so pleased. The setting was great, Enma and Regina doing due diligence on the curse was great. Regina and Robin breaking the curse was great, Regina commanding respect in the midst of a sensitive situation. Henry, scarred almost for life. Ruby and Belle, a surprise.

In the end, it was wonderful and True Love saved the day. Thanks for writing.

It's official. I am in love with your writing. I don't think I've ever laughed so much while reading a story. It was wonderful, and witty, which made it completely entertaining and amazing to read. Please never stop writing!

This was great omg

This was a great and creative idea. I cracked up over some of the antics. Very well written. Nice work.

I loved it! The writing was great, storyline and plot...outstanding! I'm a sucker for Captain Swan, have been since Hook was introduced on OUAT. Would love to read another fic you write of this fandom :)

Forgot to review! It's funny, sweet, character appropriate, and well written. Loved it so much, I've re-read it.

I really enjoyed thank you xD so fun

This was so good!Had to burst out laughing several times

This was beautiful.
The humor was successful, the angst was in character, the dialogues were believable...

If I had to come up with something to help you improve, I'd say reduce the brackets - brackets are great for by-the-way thoughts, or a flashback, or a hypothetical what-if scenario, or a secondary scene that is being intercut to, but using it for an actual part of the plot or for a part of a continuous dialogue makes the reader stop and think that the scene is switching to some of the above, not that it's continuing.

Definitely gonna read more of your stuff, this was great!

Emma's thoughts and dialogue was perfect, you really captured her. I spent a good part of this fix laughing, particlarily at the moment in which Henry walks and and "doesn't even want to know" about Regina. And then hides in the bathtub. TheCS moments were perfect. :)