Reviews for The Inevitable Weight Gain
Guest chapter 7 . 12/2/2019
This is a genuinely fantastic story. It makes me sad that it hasn't seen an update in so long, but I also understand that you probably have much better things to do than write Harry Potter smut. That being said, I think you nailed it. Thanks for the great story, I thoroughly enjoyed it
Guest chapter 7 . 8/14/2018
Hi! Great writing there! Well I really hope that there would be weight gain of Draco, the Slytherin King, and the cold professor of Slytherin, Severus Snape!

Have a Good Day! :D
pokegurl23 chapter 1 . 2/18/2017
I love your ideas. Hermione and Ginny sound so adorable! Keep up the good work!
Ian Loeb chapter 7 . 2/7/2017
Update Please
Guest chapter 6 . 8/21/2016
Harry and Ginny
A fan chapter 6 . 2/29/2016
Maybe show Harry also gaining? It Hermione was at the Burrow over the summer, Harry probably would have been, too. And while he started off thinner than the girls, he might not have the Weasley boys' metabolism. And Molly is always saying he's much too skinny...

As for shipping, I have no real preference. Maybe Hermione/Krum or Hermione/Neville?

If you're going the slash route, I could see a Snarry if Harry no longer looks like James. Or canon pairings.
pudgygirllover chapter 6 . 12/8/2015
Agh! A cliffie! You're cruel!

Seriously, though, I'm loving this, and I hope you'll continue writing it. Can't wait to see what McGonagall wants to discuss, although I have my suspicions. ;)

It's great to see you back at work on this story.
Geysterboos chapter 3 . 11/9/2015
Urgh... girl, you may be still too young to fully grasp the concept of piety, but... Obesity is an actual problem, that can lead to heart disease, cancer and even death. You, Jocarpenter, you are a horrible, horrible person for making fun of obese people.

Anyway, have a nice and sparkly day.
Geysterboos
BlackVictorianRose chapter 2 . 5/25/2015
I'm really enjoying this so far. I hope you write more soon! :-) I can't wait to see where this leads!
Guest chapter 2 . 4/13/2015
More
unknown chapter 2 . 2/28/2015
Moar
hello chapter 2 . 1/8/2015
please continue this story (if there is more)
it's good
666mewmew chapter 2 . 9/24/2014
please update soon please
Anonymous 2308 chapter 2 . 7/19/2014
Please update! So far so good
Guest chapter 2 . 6/18/2014
Really great start for a story. Can't wait to read what happens next! Hope you update soon!
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