AHHH THIS IS SO GOOD PLS UPDATE

This is so good! Please please update I've read it so many times and not knowing what will happen is killing me! I know you're busy and stuff but in your AN you said an idea and not knowing it seriously I'm dying omg
I love your writing :)

I love this omg please please if you're still writing update! I wanna know what happens next so bad omg it's really good!

Hey! I've read this like 3 times; it's really good! I know it's been like a year, but I'm hoping you're still writing, because I really want to find out what happens next! :)

I. Love. It! Stargazing is so romantical :)
But wait, does the reader have a 'dark side' too? I got that feeling from how you described the 'pang of envy' she/I felt... Anyway, I can't wait for what'll happen next time! :)

The constellations! Oh how I miss stargazing... my parents wouldn't let me out of the house if it is already very late at night. I used to go outside with my telescope to gaze at the stars (well, you couldn't call them stars if they are just displayed in the skies. They are actually just the tips of the stars. The real ones are 900 kilometers away), but now, they don't allow me to go outside because of mosquitoes. -,- Oh well...

BUT HEY HEY HEY! WAIT A MINUTE! *climbs up at the top of my desk!* SOMETHING EXCITING!? *shakes you hard* YOU BETTER UPDATE NOW CRISPY PATA-CHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAN!

NAOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! UPDATE NOW!

es hermoso *u*

OH MAH GAWD! I'M JUST LIKE MATATAGI! *spanks myself with a hammer* Er... just ignore me! XD

Anyway, GOOD JOB WITH THIS CHAPTER! It might not be that romantic, but I find it in a positive way! I have a hunch that while the readers are busy sleeping in her sleeping bag, Matatagi will sneak in and - OKAY SHOUJI! NO MORE! *covers my mouth*

This chapter was impressive and VERY ADORABLE, Crispy Pata-san! *0* Thanks for making it! ;) And I would love to look at the stars with the Matatagi brothers. :)

P.S. Calling Hayato "onii-chan" is cute!

Old friend that betrayed him?

Awww! Builting a telescope together owo. I like it. Original idea.

Spacing out, Matatagi? Tsk, tsk.

Hihi, this is so good! With his non-trusting behaviour and all! I'm looking forward to the next chapter! Too bad you lost the first draft, but don't worry, this was really nice! :3

By the way, I noticed something. In the last paragraph, it's Shun who calls out for his brother, but he says "Matatagi-kun" and not "Hayato-nii-san" (or something like that...) Just thought I'd point it out

It's a condom! XD

AAAAAAAAAAHHHHH! I AM JUMPING UP AND DOWN RIGHT NOW AND I JUST FELL OFF MY CHAIR!

This was such a GREAT update, Crispy Pata-san! I LOVE LOVE LOVE the update! ;) The scenes were so romantic, and it was so CUTE with how Matatagi denies the hug he just shared! (Even though he made the first move on meh!) I'm beginning to get MORE and MORE EXCITED for each chapters and of course, as as the future ones! :D Once again, thank you for the update! I laughed at the part where they said, "Speak Japanese!"

I was like, "Lol!" And I'm also beginning to understand and why this is Rated M... AND I AM LOOKING FORWARD TO IT! :DDDDDDDDDDDDDD

I really wanna know what did she pull out though :D Cliffhangers are always making me curious of what will happen in the next chapter...Update soon!