Oh how sweet! Oh I loved reading this! It brought up so many lovely memories of my own of Fourth of July family gatherings and staying up late at night as a kid... and oh this family is so so sweet! I love the way you wrote them!

aw sweet ;)

"I am sure. I have to take care of you because Mama is busy and because I love you".

That quote was so sweet, it gave me diabetes! CX

Oh my. I think I just melted into a puddle of goo with all the fluff here.

Aww, very cute story! Little Arwen is adorable, and I loved her interaction with her family. One small suggestion, though, to make this more authentic: instead of using Mama and Papa, you could try the elvish words Nana/Naneth (Mama/Mother) and Ada/Adar (Papa/Father). Hope to see more fics from you!

Sweet and lovely.

This is absolutely adorable (':

This is so darn cute! :) I absolutely love it. Arwen is adorable; the perfect little sister and daughter, but she still has her flaws and is completely realistic. And Elladan is too sweet for words - also Elrond. Love, love loved it! Today was not a good day, but after reading this I'm smiling and at peace again. Thank you for sharing your talents! Incredible job!

Miri

What a perfect, sweet story of little Arwen! I enjoyed it immensely.

Awwwww this is so cute! I loved how devoted everyone was to Arwen especially!
Keep up the great work!