Fück. Is this not finished or are you just evil with leaving a cliffhanger ending or is there a sequel or what. I loved this though!

I like your story, hope to read more in the future!

Will there be another chapter?

Omg in tears ! :'(

Laws you had me in tears :'(

still need to watch the shpw. whoops

You're welcome! I'm loving this story, so carry on writing, oh and Jay says she is loving it as well!
- AllThingsMagical321
Kay&Jay

Hi!
I like the story so far. To improve maybe you could try spacing it out a bit more, for example paragraphing would make it easier to follow.
Other than that its good :)

Awwwhh noo /:

Hey sweetie...I apologize I normally review everything but my iPod died and I forgot I apologize once again. But I will gladly review!
To be honest I love this story! I really do, I like how Arthur is so shocked because I feel like that's how he would actually react to it. Also the fact that Merlin said "I love you" in a moment of anger is defiently him! I do wish there was actual dialog though but I do like the way it is narratored;) how is it going to end? Will Merlin run away? OMR WILL ARTHUR'S DAD FIND OUT? This story could really go somewhere. I think you have a great first chapter that you can build off of. Seriously...I know that I am not a great role model when it comes to finishing stories but I seriously love this...you as a writer have so many different roads you can go on with this one chapter...many even more. Who knows? I really think you, as a first time writer, need to give it a shot. So what if you don't get thousands of reviews, it doesn't mean it's horrible! It only means that you just have to keep trying.
Know I didn't write this, all of this, because I felt bad but because when I started writing no one believed in me...until a fanfictioner reviewed my story. Hunny, please continue your story:)
I'll be waiting:) ill also PM you back:) thanks got the PM, it made my day to make maybe even the smallest hope that you as a writer will grow:)

-forever keep writing

PS: seriously PM about anything and everything:) okay? Love ya lots;)