OMG, I just...cried TT_TT
This is so touching, but also beautiful. I understand how Zoro is feeling that I just couldn't hold back my tears. Uwaaaaaa...

That was such a touching one shot

So SAD TT_TT! but i likes it alot

why must you hurt me this way

This story makes me cry too much it's soo sweet and sad and undeniably well written. Jus I loved it though it was soo sad it was done so well. Point is great fic!

..its so sad..nami die because of childbirth..i hope Hanahi will got nami's skill in navigation..

You put family/romance as the genre.
Tragedy was more like it! Oh, the tears! I love it so much, but it's so sad!
This is wonderfully written. It's amazing! And heartbreaking!
Ugh, need to blow my nose now.

So Nami died giving birth to her and Zoro's kid? Oh no, that's so sad.
Beautiful one-shot though.:)

I think you just ripped my heart out... This was a good story but still...

Aww this was so sad! I feel for Zoro. Reading this, I can really feel his feelings. Well done.

Also, I like how you made Hanahi's weapon a combination of Zoro's and Nami's.

The story made me cry, laugh and made me happy; Bloo I really liked your story, but I felt a little sad because Nami died in childbirth and was the day that Zoro proposed to her, but in the end made me feel happy for her daughter, Hanahi, I'm proud of you to do a story like this. :)

Greetings and Kisses :)

PS: you're a great writer, I hope you keep writing stories like this, makes me feel much joy :).

This was so good! It's actually hard to breathe right now...great job! And if you wrote this when you were sleepy, I commend you on your writing skills!

Loved what you did with Hanahi's name too. Creative.