| Reviews for Eric's first love |
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Guest chapter 1 . 10/30/2016 Boo |
The true Hero of Skill chapter 17 . 8/5/2014 loving it so far! |
orcafan1 chapter 15 . 7/25/2014 Update more soon |
Guest chapter 12 . 7/17/2014 I can't wait to see what Eric's fear landscape is. |
orcafan1 chapter 12 . 7/17/2014 I do like it |
yepitzjustx chapter 9 . 7/2/2014 haha love this story so much, especially that strip and run business wish i had the guts to pull a stunt like that. Please update soon loving this eric/oc! |
orcafan1 chapter 9 . 6/23/2014 Please update soon |
momo9411 chapter 9 . 5/28/2014 I like your story so far and I am looking forward to the next chapter :) |
musicinmymind13 chapter 5 . 5/11/2014 Can't wait to read more! Update soon! |
Megan chapter 4 . 5/6/2014 Great story so far! I love it :D Please update again soon! |
Guest chapter 3 . 5/3/2014 I loooove the story its sooo good! |
adjh chapter 4 . 5/5/2014 will what? |
Bitchy Barnes chapter 2 . 5/1/2014 It's not bad at all, I can see that you're bordering on making Eric ooc, please, please, please try not to do that. I really love reading a dark!Eric and make sure that even if you did do his POV make sure that if you do write that he has some sort of feelings for her (which he shouldn't this early) then they are really subtle. A question; is Tris in this fic? I don't mind, just curious :) But all in all, I really like where this is heading. |