What twist on things cool.

Good but it felt just a tad rush

Again, great chapter and yes sort of reviewed this in your Wattpad version, in the Another time chapter. Still think this could become a great fanfiction on it's own. Have so far watched the first 4 episodes of Spider-man Unlimited on Disney plus. Might be able to help you on a potential fanfiction. I'll send more by PM when I have more time and/or watched more episodes.

Never read the comic/series, but I read and heard things about the comic from articles and fans of the awful things Doc Ock did in Peter's body. I agree with the fans, especially the ones that are fans of Peter and Felicia as a couple that what he did to Black Cat/Felicia is pretty bad (to put mildly) and force her to be a villain again.

I and others blame Marvel for what that did to Felicia and still continue to do so and not giving the couple a fair chance nor giving Black Cat/Felicia herself a fair chance to redeem herself to become and stay a hero. Makes us wonder why. It's like a curse...

All right. You REALLY need an editor. I say this because I didn't get through this chapter before seeing something that was glaringly obviously wrong. Flash Thomas?

all right. First things first. You need to get an editor, because most of the sentences in this first chapter were incomplete sentences.

I think this could do really well on AO3. LOVE IT.

Good

Good

Awwwwwwwww! So cute, makes me wish they were together again in the comics. Sniff.

Nice . Keep up the good work

Good stuff keep it up

I still hate Otto for ruining Peter’s relationship with Felicia! The whole idea of being in someone else’s body sounds like bad fanfic.

Something like this could’ve saved their relationship back in the 90s(although there were no video games, still).

MJ was such a bitch in web of shadows and as was everyone who judged Peter for saving Black Cat. I mean how does saving a friends life(even though she was an ex-girlfriend) make him a bad guy?