Reviews for Lateral
Guest chapter 28 . 7/14
Come back pls
Berix chapter 28 . 4/28
Damn. I'm only just starting my own playthrough of Persona 3 (having been spoiled on tons of it, and moreso, convinced to play it in the first place via Fanfiction), but this is an amazing story. I can recognize each character's specific personalities, and the way that you've managed to keep Minato relevant through such a weakening is quite a sight to see. Plus, you're really quite good at writing Minato's badass moments, especially whenever he breaks the apathetic mask and lets out a quip.

Anyways, I suppose based on the last time, I'll be looking forward to seeing where this story goes in some... two years! Till then!
noahpocalypse1 chapter 28 . 7/31/2019
I love it! Hope to see a new chapter some day.
Guest chapter 28 . 12/24/2018
Isn't junpei also a casualty
Guest chapter 26 . 12/24/2018
Wassup Icarus?!
ShinyKyu chapter 10 . 12/18/2018
And this is why I can never stop drawing the parallels between Mitsuru and Makoto (of Persona 5, not Minato’s other name). Both are student council presidents, scary and commanding af, strict, smart, studious, one of the most popular waifus of their respective games, and have a love for motorcycles (I’d assume Makoto loves motorcycles since her Persona IS one, and I bet Mitsuru would be slightly jealous of her if she saw Johanna).
KageFuego4 chapter 26 . 12/10/2018
As always, another amazing chapter!
Unexpectedly permanent, yet realistic, consequences!
Even more character development! Guilt intensifies!
I’m looking forward to seeing how this is... taken, by the rest of the team. I can imagine that Minato’s reveal will either be postponed or... poorly taken, in true Hanged Man fashion~
I look forward to seeing how things progress!

Happy Writing!
- Kage
(For the New CH.28)
PickledCucumbers chapter 26 . 11/15/2018
Oops, accidently cut my review short. This one is from chapter 28 because I don't know how to edit my review there.
It hurts to read that Yukari's mom is also Junpei's emergency contact. Like damn son, his dad is real bad in your universe huh
PickledCucumbers chapter 28 . 11/15/2018
That was a satisfying conclusion to this season of lateral. I appreciate how you did your research on injuries!
P3ForFaggot chapter 1 . 10/26/2018
Difference he can truly make? Simple, that ladyboy minato are going to ruin Hamuko's story for everyone
TheBraveGallade chapter 28 . 10/22/2018
... Oh god. I'm not used to injuries and shit to the main cast in fanfics being permanent, at least to this extent. Oh god.. how is yukari even going to fight anymore? Scratch that, how is she going to handle this going forward? I imagine an injury of that extent needs at LEAST diarahan if not salvation to fully heal...
Also that moment when yukari said 'mommy' is just heartbreaking in general. We know that yukari would NEVER say mommy unless literally her world fell apart. And her mother's behavior here... She's still a mother I guess. Even if she was a bitch before this and in cannon.
sayumi-konoto chapter 28 . 10/20/2018
I'm excited for season 3! keep up the good work!
MagatsuIza chapter 28 . 10/20/2018
For now the Phoenix will sleep for a while.

LET US WAIT TILL THE DAY THE PHOENIX RISES FROM THE ASHES ONCE MORE!
DarkRai99 chapter 28 . 10/20/2018
Go Minato! Show people how Persona with only Dia and Sukunda can change the world XD
Ect0Gh0st chapter 28 . 10/20/2018
well i dropped everything as soon as this updated. i love this foc so much. "blinked (but with leadership)" lmao. the inner monologue is hilarious, but gosh poor yukari, she really never gets a break huh. in canon is almost worse when she gets the false truth. these poor characters... i wonder how sees is gonna react to their inprompt-to leader and his subsequent off the rails fix the future plans~ cant wait for what you come up with in the future! ill faithfully continue to follow this story (and reread it a lot)
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