Beautifully written. So romantic! I look forward to reading more of your stories...I mean, listening to them ;-P

The best Shammy i have ever read!

Brilliant story :)

Wow, hard to believe this is your first fic. Very good job. I loved the scavenger hunt and Sheldon's proposal was perfect!

Dawwwww

that was so cute

You did an amazing job for a first-time author of the Shamy. Your characterizations were true. Overall an enjoyable read. It's obvious that you took a great deal of care with this story and it is appreciated. Thanks for writing!

Awww! This was great

What a nice fic! It's been a joy to read. Well done!

Muito boa, Adorei sua fanfic. Espero ansiosamente a sua próxima história. Parabéns!

good job, it was what any Shamy fan would want ;)

My goodness! The feels! So romantic. I LOVE IT! Thank you so much for writing this! This really super duper awesome for a first fic. :)

This chapter was perfect! I really enjoyed this story and i hope you do more fanfictions like this. Sheldons speech was so lovely! Sniff'' just perfect

Hi there,
So, as I a writer, I'd like to to tell you a few things just to help you a long the way.
1. You're really good at capturing peoples idiosyncrasies. I think you have an amazing knack for grabbing your reading and pulling them in. you stay true to the character and you evolved them. that takes time, patience, and skill. I dislike when characters change to much and too fast. No body does that.
2. Don't worry about the attempt you made at love/sex scenes. As a writer of many erotica stories, capturing the essence of what you're trying to do. If it's an awkward couple, you don't write it as if they've always known what they were doing with language that would suggest a level of sexuality that they are not familiar with. I think you did a great job with the word choice and as well as the positioning.
3. You have a way with comedy. A good story should have moments comedy punctuated with moments of what I like to call "Aww" moments. You do a great job of that.
4. If I may offer a bit of a suggestion: At the end of this story (which I thoroughly enjoyed) Sheldon's speech felt a little rushed. I felt like I was reading him trying to push out his feelings rather than express them. A good way to fix this is to use your strengths. Punctuate the speech with a gasp from a character, or an interruption (Raj is famous for that). Just a suggestion. you may take it or leave it. :)

I really enjoyed reading this and was not let down at all by how it ended or how you chose to handle the intimacy issue. Great job!

Eeeeeee! *fangirling* The speech was wonderful and romantic and just... Gah! This chapter was amazing and the perfect end to this story. :-D

FYI - if you haven't been able to tell, your first attempt at fan fiction was AWESOME!