To continue on with my rant... There were to many time skips...

I understand having a baby in the apocalypse but seriously... At age 17, That honestly makes me think it’s not the real Lee but an OC. In the apocalypse it’s a lot more risked to have an abortion due to consequences of getting a lethal infection but in a modern AU, sane normal people would abort that little shit. Fuck OC Luke and OC Clementine and fuck OC Lee.

To add on, is Luke’s mother a fucking werewolf able to smell a literal sperm. When Luke’s been playing with his little Luke, does his mother go into his room, give it a sniff and say “I know that smell... That’s the smell of jacking off.”

I also hate how quickly characters moved on in the story. I mean sure they have to move on eventually but it’s all just mixed signals. One minute Clementine is making out with Luke, The next she remembers she doesn’t want to date and then the next they just have sex... Smh

It would have been better to show Clementine feeling actual human emotions. After Carver beat her up may be he did some temporary damage that she became self-conscious of. After she found out she was pregnant she could’ve debated commuting sucked or running away because she believes she’s too much of a slut. For god’s sake it’s rated M that means you can have those darker sciences... But no because the plot demands Clementine be horny for a few minutes, she has to raise a child because of the authors views.

I’ve gained the impression from the handling of an underage pregnancy that his views are anti-abortion. Lee’s character arc was shown that he is a kind an compassionate man yet he believes a minor should be pregnant and everyone agrees. Fuck that!

TL;DR: Author has pro-pregnancy views that go so far he believes a seventeen year old who as OC Lee put it was bright and beautiful should get pregnant. As well as that all the characters change emotions faster than Usain Bolt in a 1m race.

Dam 4 years, that's how long it took to write this. Great work.

Hey loved the story still love it but now season 4 is out you could redo this story with season 1234 characters in that would be so cool

Holy shit that was amazing loved it stayed up and read the entire thing make more plz

yas

GOOD IDEA I VERY MUCH WOULD LOVE!

Yes, that would be amazing! PLEASE do a sequel! :D

I would love to see a sequel. This has been the best story ever. It made me laugh, it made me cry. Luke and Clementine are so cute together. And don't get me started on Lucas. He's so cute and sweet. I love their little family. I thought it was so sweet that Clem wanted Luke to live out his dreams, but I felt really bad that Luke didn't get to spend the first five years with his son. I mean it's gotta be hard when your own mom keeps it a secret that you have a son. But it was so cute when they first meet, and I kept laughing at the thought of Luke's face when Lucas tells him that Clementine's his mom. I also liked how everyone in the seasons 1 and 2 of the game play different parts and have different jobs. Lilly as the principle, Sarita owns a flower shop, and Christa runs a daycare center. I absolutely loved this story, I mean there where some scenes that I didn't like and I got kind of mad at Clem and Luke, but that's just me. But once Luke left and Clem had Lucas I totally changed my attitude towards it. Hope you create a sequel! Keep up the good work!

I would absolutely love a squeal! You must!

Amazing idea!

Well it's your choice to start one, but from I see it sounds like a good idea. Still reeling from the conclusion of "The Second Chance" trilogy, I am crossing fingers for a sequel to this. Maybe Carver comes back, or maybe a life event changes Luke or others. idk I've never written a fanfic, I just read them. Lol. My face was confuse when I saw this was updated. At first I thought I clicked on something, but then it said it happened today. So I was elated. Sequels are a make or break kind of thing. I believe you're capable of it.

A sequel based on a pregnant Clem? Hell no. If she wasn't pregnant at all, I'd be on board with it. I hate fics where the girl is dating a guy and she gets pregnant.. Its a cliche..

Sure. Id like to see a sequel. Maybe carver returns and kidnaps lucas and his sister as revenge.

Maybe. Has some potential.

Maybe incorporate elements of the comic series? I'm honestly surprised there wasn't even a cameo from Rick or Carl throughout the story.

I'm not sure a sequel is the right way to go about it. Maybe a spin-off or mid-quel... Maybe?

I don't know. I'm not experienced in the high school AU genre. Just my two cents.