Reviews for A Puppet on a Lonely String
Ms.annemay chapter 3 . 8/16/2015
Hmm, is keronian abuse leagal? Bakaka...!
Well, he deserved it anyway. I wish tamamas school had cameras!
Guest chapter 10 . 7/9/2015
I loved this story so much! You really are awesome you know. ヽ()/
Hide-and-Sheik chapter 10 . 12/28/2014
Wait... Is it... done now?

Good for you, Tamama, being able to overcome your fantasy... with an affectionate Keroro and a world full of sweets... It is almost unbelievable...

Congratulations on wrapping it up! You did a good job with this one.
BlossomCherryTree chapter 7 . 11/3/2014
Okay, three chapters to go. I can do this! Man, I am really jelly of you. I wish I could put so much detail into my stories. To be more specific, the fighting. I only dream that I can write a scene so realistic, or to the point where I can easily envision it without having to read it a second time. And also, just coming up with the moves for everything. How come you can write all this kickbutt action and all I am good at is romance/fluff? *Sigh* I have some things to learn from you. But aside from kicking butt, the story is so good, I am really enjoying it. Mainly due to the fact that he is literally advancing like a pro gamer... There is much respect -
PatchTheProdigy chapter 10 . 9/21/2014
Wow, I-I'm at a loss for words. This was... amazing. A great final installment to a very pleasant story!

The suspense with Giroro and Dororo... it was pretty well done, because I know I was on the edge of my seat while I read.

The point with Tamama not wanting to settle for a fake... very much like him, and very true. I love how you did your signature: deepening their bond with it. So many people would have Tamama jump at the chance to be with any Keroro, even a fake one, when that simply wouldn't be the case. Good job there.

Nice detail with Tamama rushing to see whether something would distract him and Keroro in the fantasy. That was a nice touch!

I really liked the scene with Dragon Giroro almost making Tamama surrender. It was a nice touch. I feel sorry for Tamama feeling those things about never being able to get Keroro... good thing he won't stop trying, though.
Rainbowkittyblossomwings chapter 10 . 9/21/2014
Oh no! It broke my heart when Tamama realized Keroro was an impostor because he wouldn't feel affection for him.
The next line was great though how Tamama won't settle for anything less than real.

The ending was amazing. It was so bittersweet though. How Tamama was just happy to have a bit of attention. The emotion was great.
I especially liked how a lot of Tamama's worries linked up at the end with how he didn't bother to see who interrupted them, which had been a big thing with him for most of the story.

Good job! Congratulations for completing a story!
Himaru chapter 9 . 9/18/2014
Nooooo! Only one chapter left? I'm gonna miss this story so much! It's been one of my favorites so it'll be sad but also exciting to see how it ends. Awww the suspense is getting intense in this chapter. Despite disliking Angol Mois, you still managed to have her play an important role. That's impressive. I can't wait to see how it all turns out but I don't want to see the story end either... IM SO CONFLICTED! Best of luck on the next chapter and on your other stories as well
PatchTheProdigy chapter 9 . 9/16/2014
OHMAGOOOOOSH

Okay, I've been busy. I haven't been able to read the chapter this past week without getting interrupted.

But I loved every word! It was even better than I imagined! And I'll tell you, I had a dream about this chapter the other night!

The emotional charge in Tamama's thoughts in regards to Keroro was amazing, and it had me thinking about their dynamic on a whole new level. The dragons are ganging up on him, I see... oh my goodness!

Even Angol Mois's ANNOYINGNESS is better here! We need to see these things from Tamama's point of view, that's for sure...

And now I'm definitely looking forward to the last installment!
Hide-and-Sheik chapter 9 . 9/8/2014
The scene with Kururu breaking down was completely adorable (though I'm sure he would have broken down anyway, even without her having to threaten him) until I realized something...
"Dragon Kururu – glasses cracked and fapping as far from Angol Mois as possible – scoffed. 'Tch. Like I'd tell you!' "
Ummm... I think you might want to fix that...
Imcryingrightnow
Imseriouslycrying
Therearetearsgoingdownmyface
Imsosorry
hksjdfhksjghksdfgh
TamamaNitoheiDesu chapter 9 . 9/7/2014
Nice chapter! Can't wait for the next one .

Btw, is it just me, or are none of the pictures loading on fanfiction? o.o
Rainbowkittyblossomwings chapter 9 . 9/7/2014
Oh wow, I didn't expect Angol Mois to come in and help.

The Keroro and Tamama dialogue. It was really good. I'm glad Tamama chose to go with Keroro's first wish though.

Good job! I wonder how Tamama will win this thing.
Hide-and-Sheik chapter 8 . 8/28/2014
Haha! It's exactly what I expected. Tamama wants to kill "that woman" first, only naturally.

I like how Kururu, even in his dragon state, is tech-savvy.

Wait, what? Tamama, what are you doing, wasting your time by having flashbacks? You only have 40 minutes left!

Maybe aggravating Tamama wasn't the smartest idea on Kururu's part. Then again, he probably wasn't lying when he said that Mois was better than Tamama... xD
I mean honestly it's mostly just a personal opinion why can't Tamama smell the bias geez.

You're going to write on a plane?
Sweet.
Good job with the chapter! And sorry that it took forever for me to review (;
PatchTheProdigy chapter 8 . 8/28/2014
Whoa, talk about a good chapter! I liked the flashback, however brief it was. It made sense for Tamama to not know what "normal" was, considering his interactions. And of course his insecurity is understandable - I mean, the guy's dealt with a lot of junk his whole life thanks to others judging him for his appearance.

That is SO something Kururu would do. I also liked the description of him - feels like we haven't had one of those of the dragons in forever.

The fact that his anger is mainly about Mois makes so much sense. I love it! And Tamama's reaction is awesome.

Ooh boy... Keroro's back. This'll be interesting... I honestly look forward to seeing what will happen! I mean, will they have to fight? Will the power of emotion keep them from doing so? Did he grab the Kero Ball and is planning on destroying it or such? So many possibilities, and they're all good in their own way.

Please do share the rest of this story with us soon! (At your convenience, in reality, though.)
Himaru chapter 8 . 8/25/2014
Daaaaaaaaaaaang! I really liked this chapter, especially the flashback (it was so cute). The suspense is getting to me too
Oh no! Keroro has already transformed completely?! It seems Tamama is getting close to that point too; and what has become of Mois since that point? OAO

Also, I hope you got to enjoy your vacation and thank you for uploading this chapter
BlossomCherryTree chapter 3 . 8/22/2014
Just got finished with chapter three and realized I should be reviewing every chapter so I remember what I wanted to tell you! Anyways... I must say that my favorite part about this so far is the flashbacks. I don't know what it is with me and flashbacks, but I can never get enough of them! And that really helps build onto the story. So I look forward to more in future chapters! And I am guessing that he is going to have to face some sort of trials throughout the story, kinda like levels, which makes me want to read more, wondering what and who he might face next. Its totally good man! Can't wait to start chapter 4!
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