I love how the elves were given opportunity to shine in this fic . They were so fun and so cute . Bonny's sass is so hilarious. a damn manipulator too lol

Simply beautiful and satisfying.

For the first time, I love Ginny. :D

I am in love with this masterpiece.

So sexy. I like their interactions.

Really good concept. Love it.

Amazing! So excited

I loved the happily-ever-after ending, with Harry and Draco getting along as friends at Ron's wedding! I thought it was sweet how Scorpius is so enamored with the baby elf, (such a cute picture!) but he is 4 years old, so hardly an infant. This was a neat HP twist on Beauty and the Beast!

I liked how you wrote their mating, and thought it was sweet how Maddy went to try to get Pumpy to be his daddy!

Thank goodness Ginny talked some sense into her! There are some errors with the English, but I loved seeing them "grinding" together. If only he would've just told her that she is his mate! Sure could've avoided all that anguish.

Wow, I'm impressed with his speech apologizing to Hermione! Very heartfelt. I'm guessing she'll go search him out later on...after she has some time to think about all he said.

Interesting that his voce and scent bring that kind of attraction in Hermione, though I wonder if she believes he told the truth? I'm not familiar with the term "blue murder" but I'm assuming it's like "bloody murder"?

This story also reminds me of Sleeping Beauty, with Bellatrix cursing infant Draco like Maleficent cursed baby Aurora. I'm also glad you brought a little of Dobby into this.

Interesting story, though the elf-speak seems a bit odd. This is much easier to read than one translated from French. Bill seems like a real peach! (Not!)

This was a great story!