Good job

omg that got me going that was really hot thanks for writing that and please write more

i loved it...perfect amount of plot, so it wasn't just straight smut, but sexy. Just as a captain swan fan fic should be ;)

Great job, i liked it.. very hot not at all boring.. and if any one tells you any different tell them to go away

That was honestly perfect lol it was very smutty and I loved the little fluff

Wow loved it!

Not gonna lie, this was a great smutty one-shot and one if the best sex scenes I have ever read. This was absolutely amazing. I'm one for reading great plotsso I really liked this. I believe it fit really well into the story, and as you so poetically put it, I believe that there is just enough plot and porn. Haha, but seriously this was amazing, you did a great job with it. I'm going to check out your other story now haha, so yea, until I maybe review again. ;) :D

This was written very well, you don't have anything to worry about for when you get to the smut in your other story.

Very nicely written little one shot. You slipped up once or twice when you mentioned Hook's "hands" but besides that, I very much so enjoyed it.

If that was your first crack at smut, I'm extremely impressed...it was excellent! Not too vague, believably accurate to character, and HOT, Keep it up, i'm following you.

hot!

HOLY CRAP! WELL DONE!

Excellent intimacy and erotica. It was a very well written scene. Nice work.

Hot.

stoppp you are actually causing me psychical pain with your cuteness